More Than Meets the Eye

Don't blame the bearer of bad news -
A gun doesn't kill by itself or a knife,
Nor a violent video game or hostile views;
An evil act is but wrought by a mind's strife.

When you nurture a seedling or stunt its growth,
You can foretell it'll be a vine or an oak tree,
So is with the mind of a child as he grows forth -
Will he be hateful or inherit his life stress-free.

There are spiritual laws that govern with
the same certainty as the physical laws;
Faith, trust in God, and love are not ancient myth
But values that shape the character sans flaws.

Like putty, wax, dough or a lump of clay,
Mold the child right lest another soul he slay!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 20, 2013 at 9:51 AM
Abdul, :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice exposure in Yasmin's "Video Games Played " extravaganza... take care ~PD
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January 18, 2013 at 7:50 AM
I enjoyed what you have said here we neglect our spiritual lives at great peril. Congratulations on win.
Guzzi Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 7:21 AM
You and I are of like mind. I recieved your book yesterday, thank you so much. Congrad's on your thoughtful write winning. Light & Love
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January 18, 2013 at 3:31 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Abdul xx
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January 2, 2013 at 3:15 PM
Love the sonnet, more than is all i can say*LUV~SKAT
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December 28, 2012 at 3:45 PM
interesting poem xoxo pd
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