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More Than Meets the Eye

Don't blame the bearer of bad news - A gun doesn't kill by itself or a knife, Nor a violent video game or hostile views; An evil act is but wrought by a mind's strife. When you nurture a seedling or stunt its growth, You can foretell it'll be a vine or an oak tree, So is with the mind of a child as he grows forth - Will he be hateful or inherit his life stress-free. There are spiritual laws that govern with the same certainty as the physical laws; Faith, trust in God, and love are not ancient myth But values that shape the character sans flaws. Like putty, wax, dough or a lump of clay, Mold the child right lest another soul he slay!

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Date: 1/20/2013 9:51:00 AM
Abdul, :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice exposure in Yasmin's "Video Games Played " extravaganza... take care ~PD
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:50:00 AM
I enjoyed what you have said here we neglect our spiritual lives at great peril. Congratulations on win.
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:21:00 AM
You and I are of like mind. I recieved your book yesterday, thank you so much. Congrad's on your thoughtful write winning. Light & Love
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Date: 1/18/2013 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Abdul xx
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Date: 1/2/2013 3:15:00 PM
Love the sonnet, more than is all i can say*LUV~SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2012 3:45:00 PM
interesting poem xoxo pd
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