Notes About The Poem
This poem is about how I prefer to have the right experience take place instead of writing about a negative experience. It's about wanting her honesty. I believe she is a human being at the end of the day, not successful poetry.

More Than Just Words

I'm tired of you becoming just words,
                                         On every page when I write at night.
                                           I saw you as a pretty face at first;
                                         I wouldn't mind if my ink pen dried.

                                       I say it because you're a human being;
                                           These situations are not my type.
                                       I want "I love you" to mean something,
                                             And you stay right by my side.

                                              Honestly, when I write poetry,
                              The feeling is unconfirmed, undecided, undefined.
                                               You are worth more to me
                                     Than words written down on every line.

                                          I'd prefer to have you in my arms;
                                        Paper and pen will not tear us apart.


                                                

                                                   ©2013 Honestly JT
                               For P.D.' s "Any Poem Goes #6" Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 28, 2014 at 3:21 PM
JT , CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT
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January 5, 2014 at 3:00 AM
Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win,
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January 3, 2014 at 9:39 PM
Honestly JT, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. Stop by and read my latest when you have time, I will miss you:( have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"
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