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More Than I Hoped You'D Be

More than I hoped you'd be You are...more than I hoped you'd be You're the sweet nectar to this honey bee I...I have been drawn ...to you One....is now... the sum of two I've found a treasure known to none No need to keep digging this tunnel of love You...you have given sight to blind eyes Now all I can see...is you, you mesmerize As we dance under pale moons glow hearts twisting and turning entwined Star light flickers as loves shadow grows Together we bind the hands of time Eagles fly to places unknown to us They have the freedom to ride the breeze Let me take you to a land of trust Exploring each other and true love seize John Derek Hamilton March 14,2021

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Date: 4/29/2021 12:01:00 PM
You do have a way with rhyme John! Enjoyed!:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/29/2021 7:45:00 PM
Thanks again Brenda
Date: 3/16/2021 8:55:00 PM
This is an amazing poem, John, you must try these more often:) congratulations on your happy married life for so long, may God grant you and your wife many more years of togetherness:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/17/2021 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Jo so nice to have you visit today, thanks for your kind words of support!
Date: 3/16/2021 12:34:00 PM
WoW! John, What a beautiful and romantic write. Most search a lifetime to find a love like you described. It's a blessing to find it. Congratulations on so many years of marriage. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/17/2021 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Lexi, so nice of you to pass by today with your words of support!
Date: 3/14/2021 12:53:00 PM
This is heartfelt, sweet, ode to love, John. Much enjoyed the voice of your tribute to special someone. I am sure she loves the land of trust.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/15/2021 7:58:00 AM
BIG congrats, John! A tremendous milestone!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/14/2021 2:13:00 PM
Yes she does just had our 26th anniversary so something is working, (maybe the rhymes lol) thanks for your kind words of support!
Date: 3/14/2021 12:33:00 PM
Very nice John! A special romance :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/14/2021 2:11:00 PM
Thanks a lot Heidi, glad you came by today!
Date: 3/14/2021 9:27:00 AM
That’s truly romantically charmed poetry John. Regards, Belle
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/14/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thanks Belle ya a little different than my normal fare, glad you liked it and came by today!
Date: 3/14/2021 9:18:00 AM
aww how beautiful and romantic a rhyme John:-) hugs jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 3/14/2021 11:29:00 AM
Well thank you Jan glad you liked it enough to comment!

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