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More Than I Hoped You'D Be

More than I hoped you'd be You are...more than I hoped you'd be You're the sweet nectar to this honey bee I...I have been drawn ...to you One....is now... the sum of two I've found a treasure known to none No need to keep digging this tunnel of love You...you have given sight to blind eyes Now all I can see...is you, you mesmerize As we dance under pale moons glow hearts twisting and turning entwined Star light flickers as loves shadow grows Together we bind the hands of time Eagles fly to places unknown to us They have the freedom to ride the breeze Let me take you to a land of trust Exploring each other and true love seize John Derek Hamilton March 14,2021

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 4/29/2021 12:01:00 PM

You do have a way with rhyme John! Enjoyed!:)

John Hamilton
Date: 4/29/2021 7:45:00 PM

Thanks again Brenda

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/16/2021 8:55:00 PM

This is an amazing poem, John, you must try these more often:) congratulations on your happy married life for so long, may God grant you and your wife many more years of togetherness:)

John Hamilton
Date: 3/17/2021 8:56:00 AM

Thanks Jo so nice to have you visit today, thanks for your kind words of support!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/16/2021 12:34:00 PM

WoW! John, What a beautiful and romantic write. Most search a lifetime to find a love like you described. It's a blessing to find it. Congratulations on so many years of marriage. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

John Hamilton
Date: 3/17/2021 8:56:00 AM

Thanks Lexi, so nice of you to pass by today with your words of support!