Evelyn Rose Poet Free verse

More Than Death

i love you more
than i want to die.
i love you more
than death completely.
 
you fill the space
between my lungs.
i love you more
than morning songs.
 
take me in your chevy
when things are getting heavy.
i love you more
than death completely,
so drive fast.
 
you are my morning 
cups of coffee
and my spliff
when i need a lift.
 
rock me like a baby,
like i'm you're only baby.
i love you more
than death completely.
 
take me to bed
and let us get high.
i love you more
than i want to die.

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Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2015 at 8:05 AM This was a dark bit of fun!

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2015 at 6:44 PM Interesting way to go for the contest with this winner..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2015 at 5:21 PM Carlyn, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 10:13 AM That's deep Carlyn, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT

Dorian Petersen Potter February 8, 2015 at 11:34 AM Well written pen! excellent piece to read, dear friend. In His light! God bless! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.