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More Than Death

i love you more than i want to die. i love you more than death completely. you fill the space between my lungs. i love you more than morning songs. take me in your chevy when things are getting heavy. i love you more than death completely, so drive fast. you are my morning cups of coffee and my spliff when i need a lift. rock me like a baby, like i'm you're only baby. i love you more than death completely. take me to bed and let us get high. i love you more than i want to die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/28/2015 8:05:00 AM
This was a dark bit of fun!
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Date: 6/1/2015 6:44:00 PM
Interesting way to go for the contest with this winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:21:00 PM
Carlyn, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/27/2015 10:13:00 AM
That's deep Carlyn, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT
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Date: 2/8/2015 11:34:00 AM
Well written pen! excellent piece to read, dear friend. In His light! God bless! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.
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