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Placed First in : More Than a Soft Toy Poetry Contest of Natasha L Scragg

More Than a Soft Toy

More Than a Soft Toy

                                                  A doll gifted to my toddler daughter 
                                                  More lasting joy, it imbued upon her
                                               Than precious jewels adorning her ears
                                                 Ever since her infant to adult years.

                                          Painted pink bright with cheerful colours bold,
                                                   The toy awaits a story to be told;
                                                   It`s a tie to a past, a gentle guide
                                                To a tale in a heart, held deep inside.

                                                 Caring for the soft toy like a mother,
                                                 She would attend to it like a toddler,
                                              She cuddled it by her side while asleep,
                                             Displaying affection, profound and deep;

                                                She fed it with a spoonful of her food
                                          Every time she consumed her meals for good,
                                           Dressed it with new clothing every weekend,
                                          Brushed its hair with a small comb like a pen;

                                                 More than a toy, it was a silent grace,
                                                   Listening raptly, with a smiling face,
                                                  To whispers of hope without any fear
                                             As to murmurs of grief with drops of tears.

                                              At touch of a key, it would glow with smile, 
                                            Seamlessly sing a stream of songs with style,
                                                  Exhibit distressed eyes of solemn grief
                                               One would wonder with spells of disbelief. 

                                                 With tireless watch, devoid of any sigh,
                                                   It stared at life unfold before its eyes
                                              Holding guard beside its master`s bedside,
                                              With its eyes shining bright and ever wide;

                                                 The gifted doll, more than a soft toy old,
                                                    Endures as a reminder, true and bold,
                                                 In the life of my accomplished daughter,
                                                  Now a shining primary school teacher. 

                                              It`s more than a soft toy, with stitches small,
                                                It holds memories standing strong and tall,
                                                    A little heart, woven with love so true,
                                                     A lifelong passion, sparkling ever new.

                                                   More than a toy, it`s a bridge to her past,
                                                        A reminiscence that will ever last,
                                                          More than a soft toy, it really is,
                                                     A special source of serene silent bliss.
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Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Truly, a gifted doll! Congratulations, Krishnanand!
Derden Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 12:05 PM
This is a lovely poem that perfectly captures the enduring emotional connection between a child and their cherished toy. A fine winning poem. Congrats.
Guptar Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 12:47 PM
Thank you friend for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. Sending you my wishes for a pleasant day.
George Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 2:37 AM
"More than a toy, it`s a bridge to her past, A reminiscence that will ever last," Lovely poem on a toy gifted to your daughter which became part and parcel of her childhood days. It stays as a bridge between her past and present. Congratulations on your first place win.
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September 15, 2025 at 8:13 AM
You've penned an excellent poem with many beautiful layers of metaphors. I like this stanza: The gifted doll, more than a soft toy old, Endures as a reminder, true and bold, In the life of my accomplished daughter, Now a shining primary school teacher. Best wishes for the contest.
Guptar Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 11:49 PM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above poem and your kind wishes. Your comments are always so inspiring. Wishing you a pleasant new week.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 12:27 PM
A beauty of a write!
Guptar Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 11:51 PM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above poem. Sending you wishes for a delightful new week.
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