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Written 12 September 2025 for More Than a Soft Toy Poetry Contest of Natasha L Scragg

More Than a Soft Toy

More Than a Soft Toy

                                                  A doll gifted to my toddler daughter 
                                                  More lasting joy, it imbued upon her
                                               Than precious jewels adorning her ears
                                                 Ever since her infant to adult years.

                                          Painted pink bright with cheerful colours bold,
                                                   The toy awaits a story to be told;
                                                   It`s a tie to a past, a gentle guide
                                                To a tale in a heart, held deep inside.

                                                 Caring for the soft toy like a mother,
                                                 She would attend to it like a toddler,
                                              She cuddled it by her side while asleep,
                                             Displaying affection, profound and deep;

                                                She fed it with a spoonful of her food
                                          Every time she consumed her meals for good,
                                           Dressed it with new clothing every weekend,
                                          Brushed its hair with a small comb like a pen;

                                                 More than a toy, it was a silent grace,
                                                   Listening raptly, with a smiling face,
                                                  To whispers of hope without any fear
                                             As to murmurs of grief with drops of tears.

                                              At touch of a key, it would glow with smile, 
                                            Seamlessly sing a stream of songs with style,
                                                  Exhibit distressed eyes of solemn grief
                                               One would wonder with spells of disbelief. 

                                                 With tireless watch, devoid of any sigh,
                                                   It stared at life unfold before its eyes
                                              Holding guard beside its master`s bedside,
                                              With its eyes shining bright and ever wide;

                                                 The gifted doll, more than a soft toy old,
                                                    Endures as a reminder, true and bold,
                                                 In the life of my accomplished daughter,
                                                  Now a shining primary school teacher. 

                                              It`s more than a soft toy, with stitches small,
                                                It holds memories standing strong and tall,
                                                    A little heart, woven with love so true,
                                                     A lifelong passion, sparkling ever new.

                                                   More than a toy, it`s a bridge to her past,
                                                        A reminiscence that will ever last,
                                                          More than a soft toy, it really is,
                                                     A special source of serene silent bliss.
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Date: 9/15/2025 8:13:00 AM
You've penned an excellent poem with many beautiful layers of metaphors. I like this stanza: The gifted doll, more than a soft toy old, Endures as a reminder, true and bold, In the life of my accomplished daughter, Now a shining primary school teacher. Best wishes for the contest.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 9/15/2025 11:49:00 PM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above poem and your kind wishes. Your comments are always so inspiring. Wishing you a pleasant new week.
Date: 9/14/2025 12:27:00 PM
A beauty of a write!
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 9/15/2025 11:51:00 PM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above poem. Sending you wishes for a delightful new week.
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