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More Than a Rose, Less Than a Posy

More than a rose is my love for you, so how can it be that your heart is less true. Yet, deeper in me, stirs the passion of baalim, while your burning flamed fire has started to dim. The petals that fall from this bud to the ground, what's left, the remnants of the love that we found. In truth, my desire, a single red rose, boldly festers my limerence as my yearning grows. You spoke of our love as if it were wrong, and the passion we had could not keep it strong. Now you stand there weeping, all adorned in white, don't think that your tears have belittled this slight. You have made it clear while your feeling departs, how my now broken heart is missing some parts. To me, you are more than a bud, red and rosy, but unlike your bouquet, I am less than a posy.
02/06/2021

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Date: 6/20/2021 11:00:00 AM
The little things have greater meaning for some of us when it comes to love. It really is a shame when those we are in love with, just don't see the little things in that same way... A great piece of poetry from you, James... Very well written and expressed from the heart, with a beautiful flow and nice rhyming couplets...
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James Inman
Date: 8/14/2021 10:02:00 AM
Hi Kelly, sorry for my delay in responding, it's only been a month and a half. For some reason I no longer get emails when someone leaves a comment. I just had a moment this morning to make a visit. Thanks for the lovely comment. I am hoping to finish a Christmas, Epic Poem well before Christmas this year that I will start posting in increments with the final one posted on Christmas Eve. It's quite long and I'll be amazed if anyone reads the whole thing. : ) Thanks again.

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