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More Than a Lover

Like a shadow you slipped into my life just to talk to me you waited in strife more careful than others you didnt knock down walls but took one brick away at a time you waited so sweetly for me to talk to tell you secrets that id tell others not and let me build up something so strong trust for you that truly belonged you found my weakness and kept it safe makeing a smile come to my face making me laugh when i wanted to cry and holding me gently when i wanted to die sometime silently you found a path to my heart like it was simple math you unlocked chains and slipped inside never to ever make me cry when i was hurt i came to you you asked me please if you could hurt them too make them wish that i was okay make them beg for another day into my ear you whisper sometimes telling me that secrets as you hold me tight Spanish words flow into my ear as you pull me close as you pull me near i love you too i whisper back and know that these feelings are a fact more than a friend not like a brother more than a boy friend more than a lover

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/20/2009 2:53:00 AM
"you didnt knock down walls but took one brick away at a time "Those Line got Me enchanted<3 Love This One Booooo
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Date: 6/8/2009 10:07:00 AM
My favorite too (so far!) really this has such an elegant end and its extreemly touching, bravo xx
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Date: 5/20/2009 10:17:00 AM
you said this with more passion and intent than your others they are all great but this is my favorite great job
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