More Than a Heartwarming Gesture

i booked this trip
just to see the look
on your face

it sounds cliché, but
your reactions are 
priceless

when we get over that
bridge, i knew that i had
made the right choice

it is in the smile of your
voice

during this trip, you forget
that you are a first timer in
a last chance society

you have been working so 
hard just to stay afloat for
so many years

despite the pain that your 
stomach hernia causes you 
at times....you keep it movin'

i felt you deserved to be rewarded
for that

sometimes in life what you do for others
is more satisfying than the simplest of self 
satisfaction

i too discover that i have lots left to learn
through the way you carry yourself even in
this paradise

thank God for me not listening to the other 
side of my reluctance....i would probably still
be leaving footprints in the collected powder
dust in the corner and feeling sorry for myself

going and being anywhere with you is like 
upgrading the prosperity of my overall well-
being and wealth....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/13/2015 4:54:00 AM
The joy of giving without thought of return enriches life like nothing else both for the giver and the receiver. Great sentiments. Kind regards, Ian
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