More Than a Friend

I hope you're doing ok
 when i don't see you 
I wonder if i was your man
 could i ever leave you
there's a difference in how i feel 
and the way that he do
but it's ok i understand 
cause i see he needs you
I could never tare apart
 something G.O.D do
and can't believe what he said 
when he said he wants to leave you
now can't you see that these words i say 
i really mean to
so when you read them in your mind
 you know i really need you
i wouldn't take you from you man 
it ain't fare to cheat dude
I'll let you save the best for last 
cause i want to please you
I'll only ask for your love 
and that you tell the truth and need to
even if it's going to hurt me
 more than it hurts you...........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/26/2010 10:57:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem today. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2010 10:34:00 AM
Very good write, been there my friend...you cross the line and everything changes, sometimes for the good and other times not so much...good luck Michael
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