More Than a Few

It's the little things
that make all the difference
My mind was racing
as well as my heart
I like it better when it's just me and you
But I can adjust
and make this work right
Just give me a lot more time
My stomach's starting to settle
as I sit here and write
I like all the hours
as I looked back on this night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 8:42 PM
Very nice writing, Corinne. Sometimes it is worth expending a little extra effort to make things work. Love, Carolyn
Higgins Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 5:12 PM
The last two lines are precious..this is wonderful write that sang to me.
Shango Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 4:55 PM
And may you always have peace and time to carve words out of memory ... love.
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