More Than a Crush

I first saw you at the funfair
Joy and laughter were high in the air
It felt like more than a crush.

Caught a sight of you walking at the mall
Nearly caused my heart to fall 
It was more than a crush.

Then I saw you sitting by the lakeside
I felt very warm inside
It was more than a crush.

Each time I saw you I would freeze
It was as if there was a breeze
Making me go weak on my knees
For it was more than a crush.

Though I saw you at midday
I thought about you everyday
Went on my knees to pray
To have you by my side along the way.

Then there you were working at a farm
Wanted to grab you into my arm
It was more than a crush.

In a people filled room
My eyes and yours would zoom
Because it was more than a crush.

You looked so so fine
I wanted to ask you out for a dine
It was more than a crush.

Then you were strolling on the shore
And I knew for sure
That what I felt was more than a crush.

It was that feeling of love
That was sent from above.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gupta Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 7:18 AM
Lovely ... a wonderful 'sent from above' love ...
Mwashinga Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 8:13 PM
Great poem. Catches imagination!
Williams Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Well written, I really enjoyed it
Gupta Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Beautiful ending ... Liked the poem ...
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