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More than a crush

I first saw you at the funfair Joy and laughter were high in the air It felt like more than a crush. Caught a sight of you walking at the mall Nearly caused my heart to fall It was more than a crush. Then I saw you sitting by the lakeside I felt very warm inside It was more than a crush. Each time I saw you I would freeze It was as if there was a breeze Making me go weak on my knees For it was more than a crush. Though I saw you at midday I thought about you everyday Went on my knees to pray To have you by my side along the way. Then there you were working at a farm Wanted to grab you into my arm It was more than a crush. In a people filled room My eyes and yours would zoom Because it was more than a crush. You looked so so fine I wanted to ask you out for a dine It was more than a crush. Then you were strolling on the shore And I knew for sure That what I felt was more than a crush. It was that feeling of love That was sent from above.

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Date: 4/21/2017 7:18:00 AM
Lovely ... a wonderful 'sent from above' love ...
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Date: 4/16/2017 8:13:00 PM
Great poem. Catches imagination!
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Date: 3/7/2017 7:19:00 AM
Well written, I really enjoyed it
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Date: 2/22/2017 7:43:00 AM
Beautiful ending ... Liked the poem ...
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