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More Perfect Than a Da Vinci

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contest Komorebi

sponsor Craig Cornish

When all the poetic themes have been written and all the images created with all their shades and shadowed renderings Would a vision sustain beauty in our souls? Where the universe in the mind becomes aware of our thoughts when a naturally painted picture is seen filled with wisps of elegant light drifting through pliable limbs to form silhouettes without movement And yet, cascades to the eyes of an artist whose imagination sees in three dimensions When the beauty of light is painted on a canvas of leaves and limbs bending in the wind like a heartfelt glimpse of tranquility that penetrates the soul as it surrenders to Nature's painting More perfect in its inspiration than a Da Vinci

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Date: 12/3/2023 7:33:00 AM
A beautiful write, Fredric ~ warmest congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 11/2/2023 7:38:00 AM
- Beautiful ... inspiration through paintings, nature and poetry ...the soul fulfilled, Frederic :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/31/2023 5:13:00 AM
Those opening lines are so thought provoking! And beautiful! A very deep write as well as well written lines really. I love the flow of this, and how descriptive you are with words! Brilliant! Goodluck for the contest
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