More or Less

Les Moore went down to the liquor store

But then wound up passed out on the floor

He woke Gin anointed

And guite disappointed 

So I guess you might say less is more
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Allison Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 2:53 PM
clever limerick Randy:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:12 PM
I adore the limerick form,I never wrote a limerick until i joined soup in 2014 and now its my favourite form, There are lots in my current humour book and writing la lot of new material for the next one!:-) hugs jan xx
Freie Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 2:57 PM
Thanks Jan, I've been on a limerick kick lately. I appreciate your feedback.
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