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More Mellow

As I reach my final years, the more mellow I become Stresses that once bothered me, I no longer succumb An easy going dude In a laid back mood Almost fell off to dreamland with my thumb up my bum

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/10/2017 10:46:00 AM

Now that is mellow. A rather uncomfortable position in which to sleep

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/10/2017 11:08:00 AM

lol not if I don't want to!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/10/2017 10:53:00 AM

You can get used to anything... ya do what ya gotta do dear Patricia!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/9/2017 9:37:00 AM

Sap runs out, we get mellow//No more mellow a fellow//Than old Jack//that's a fack(ct)(poetic license!)//he's not red, white, blue or yellow. DREAM ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/9/2017 10:29:00 AM

YELLOW!!! Doesn't that usually denotes cowardice? GIVEN THE RIGHT CIRCUMSTANCES, WE CAN BE QUITE NASTY!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/9/2017 6:06:00 AM

HA ha! You have tickled my funny bone with this hilarious write my friend! What a fantastic poem Jackson! I surely loved reading your delightfully ingenious piece this morning! You have amazed me by your fabulous piece! You might like my poem, "My Toes," give it a read and see if you enjoyed it my friend!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/9/2017 6:10:00 AM

I will definitely check it out! GO EASY MY FRIEND!!!