More Mellow

As I reach my final years, the more mellow I become Stresses that once bothered me, I no longer succumb An easy going dude In a laid back mood Almost fell off to dreamland with my thumb up my bum
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Now that is mellow. A rather uncomfortable position in which to sleep
Cresswell Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 11:08 AM
lol not if I don't want to!
Ellison Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 10:53 AM
You can get used to anything... ya do what ya gotta do dear Patricia!!! xxx
Flats Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Sap runs out, we get mellow//No more mellow a fellow//Than old Jack//that's a fack(ct)(poetic license!)//he's not red, white, blue or yellow. DREAM ON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:29 AM
YELLOW!!! Doesn't that usually denotes cowardice? GIVEN THE RIGHT CIRCUMSTANCES, WE CAN BE QUITE NASTY!!!
Sivey Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 6:06 AM
HA ha! You have tickled my funny bone with this hilarious write my friend! What a fantastic poem Jackson! I surely loved reading your delightfully ingenious piece this morning! You have amazed me by your fabulous piece! You might like my poem, "My Toes," give it a read and see if you enjoyed it my friend!
Ellison Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 6:10 AM
I will definitely check it out! GO EASY MY FRIEND!!!
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