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More Grave Than Perfect Penmanship

can I follow up greatest words ever written, blue skies on thin ice? should one’s theology be impeccable...shatterproof? 2/10/2020 Do your best to present yourself to God as one approved, a workman who does not need to be ashamed and who correctly handles the word of truth. 2 Timothy 2:15 NIV

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2020 5:15:00 PM

Thought provoking, Kim. All religions feel that their theoloy is impeccable. Well, different ones that I talk to seem to feel that way.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2020 7:37:00 AM

This poem is specific to Christianity and my desire, if at all I put pen to paper on the subject, to get it right. Blessings, sweet Andrea! Thank you.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/15/2020 4:37:00 PM

There are several theologians who say that Christ is not impeccable, but sinless. I reason that as the Son of God he would be both! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2020 7:36:00 AM

This questionku is more about a Christian writing about God. Do we write the truth or bend it? I was listening to a sermon on songs sung in the church and how they don’t always pass the test. Hence my hesitancy, my respect to honor God with my poetry.

Silent One

Date: 2/15/2020 8:33:00 AM

Well put Kim...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2020 8:38:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/14/2020 7:56:00 PM

wonderful write Kim :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2020 9:04:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Poet!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2020 12:27:00 PM

- Great written, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2020 2:25:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/13/2020 7:22:00 PM

Bought provoking, excellent write. xomo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2020 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, sweet poet! :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/13/2020 2:06:00 PM

Well penned.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2020 5:43:00 PM

Thank you, M.L.!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/13/2020 10:46:00 AM

No one is perfect, all we can hope for is we have faith and that the little voice we hear is from God. And allow Him to lead the way and we follow. Perfect verse, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2020 5:44:00 PM