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As moonshine hangs low casting light afar with orange beams rippling on true hearts pressed; surrounding a line of pure, coupled stars while fingers hunger for love, possessed ... oh, can there be a scene like this more blessed? If life could pluck hours, let my age withdraw come love, for we have boat rides more to row. And as sunrise prays with the mountaintop lapping against clear fog the prairies keep... just there, dawn sprinkles on each dewdrop waking the calm of a morn from its sleep how can a day hold glory half as deep? And if breaths could grasp ripples of life’s glow come dream with me, for we have years to sow! Contest of Laura Loo: Rhyme Royal form Re- entered 2/23/2018

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Date: 7/28/2017 12:20:00 PM
Gorgeous.
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Date: 10/31/2012 11:02:00 AM
This is so great nette. Thoroughly enjoyed. Congratulations
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Date: 10/30/2012 8:13:00 PM
Great job, nette. Congrats. Nice going. love, Ralph
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Date: 10/29/2012 10:38:00 PM
Another great poem. I love it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/29/2012 8:42:00 PM
HI NETTE, ONCE AGAIN..:-), CONGRATULATIONS IN "Dana'lynn Smith" CONTEST... ALWAYS~ PD
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Date: 10/29/2012 3:21:00 PM
very creative this one is. One of the best for imagery! Congrats on your well deserved win, Nette.
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Date: 10/29/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Dana'lynn's "The Girl" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2012 12:18:00 AM
SUPER CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON AN EXTRAORDINARY WRITE AND TOP OF THE LINE WIN LUV .. ALWAYS A TREASURE TO VIEW YOUR CREATIVE STYLE ..OH .. 2 ..WELL JUST FOR U .. EYESIGHT FADING ..HARD TO READ REQUIREMENTS SOMETIMES .. WILL DO .. I SO LUV THE PHOTOGENIC INSPIRATION ..
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Date: 3/10/2012 12:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/7/2012 9:11:00 PM
congrats Nette luv on another outstanding write and win for PD's #3 contest winning poems.. all your poems are top winners to me luv..
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Date: 3/7/2012 6:00:00 PM
Golden years we all hope! Congrad's On Your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/7/2012 3:05:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest nette; such a beautiful verse, the imagery stunning as always :-)
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:53:00 AM
Good afternoon and congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "3rd place wins Only" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:23:00 AM
conrats on the placement Nette.........~sashi
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:09:00 AM
NETTE,,.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 10/10/2011 2:34:00 PM
a difficult form done so well, with abundant personification,[oh, can there be a scene like this more blessed?] very Shakespearian! Congrad's on your win Light & love
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:21:00 PM
Congrats Nette luv on an outstanding win with this incredible entry so expressing the dream theme my friend..enjoy with luv ..this big winner...
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Date: 10/9/2011 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:57:00 AM
Nicely done nette. Congratulations on your win in Dreams
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:27:00 AM
I couldn't resist the title, Nette. Eye-catched my eyes to read it. Wonderful. Congrats on your win, in Dr. Ram and Frank H contest. Wow, 2 wins in a poem. Greatly written.
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Date: 9/6/2011 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Royal Rhyme" contest Nette. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:47:00 AM
Congrats Nette luv on another stupendous win with this extraordinary entry as only u can create my friend.. enjoy sweet success luv..
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Date: 9/4/2011 12:47:00 AM
Nette, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2011 11:16:00 PM
Congrats on the win in my contest, nette
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Date: 9/1/2011 3:55:00 PM
Appreicated the way you have sewn this one up Nette..! a real flight of fantasy to enjoy..!
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