More Dreams To Row

As moonshine hangs low casting light afar with orange beams rippling on true hearts pressed; surrounding a line of pure, coupled stars while fingers hunger for love, possessed ... oh, can there be a scene like this more blessed? If life could pluck hours, let my age withdraw come love, for we have boat rides more to row. And as sunrise prays with the mountaintop lapping against clear fog the prairies keep... just there, dawn sprinkles on each dewdrop waking the calm of a morn from its sleep how can a day hold glory half as deep? And if breaths could grasp ripples of life’s glow come dream with me, for we have years to sow! Contest of Laura Loo: Rhyme Royal form Re- entered 2/23/2018
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Cozart Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Gorgeous.
Quigley Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 11:02 AM
This is so great nette. Thoroughly enjoyed. Congratulations
Taylor Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 8:13 PM
Great job, nette. Congrats. Nice going. love, Ralph
Johnson Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 10:38 PM
Another great poem. I love it. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 8:42 PM
HI NETTE, ONCE AGAIN..:-), CONGRATULATIONS IN "Dana'lynn Smith" CONTEST... ALWAYS~ PD
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 3:21 PM
very creative this one is. One of the best for imagery! Congrats on your well deserved win, Nette.
Brown Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Dana'lynn's "The Girl" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 12:18 AM
SUPER CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON AN EXTRAORDINARY WRITE AND TOP OF THE LINE WIN LUV .. ALWAYS A TREASURE TO VIEW YOUR CREATIVE STYLE ..OH .. 2 ..WELL JUST FOR U .. EYESIGHT FADING ..HARD TO READ REQUIREMENTS SOMETIMES .. WILL DO .. I SO LUV THE PHOTOGENIC INSPIRATION ..
Merryman Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 12:10 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette! Love, Kim
Sweetheart Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 9:11 PM
congrats Nette luv on another outstanding write and win for PD's #3 contest winning poems.. all your poems are top winners to me luv..
Guzzi Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:00 PM
Golden years we all hope! Congrad's On Your win! Light & Love
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March 7, 2012 at 3:05 PM
congrats on your win in the contest nette; such a beautiful verse, the imagery stunning as always :-)
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:53 AM
Good afternoon and congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "3rd place wins Only" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Prabhu Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:23 AM
conrats on the placement Nette.........~sashi
A   Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:09 AM
NETTE,,.Congratulations! THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Guzzi Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 2:34 PM
a difficult form done so well, with abundant personification,[oh, can there be a scene like this more blessed?] very Shakespearian! Congrad's on your win Light & love
Sweetheart Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Congrats Nette luv on an outstanding win with this incredible entry so expressing the dream theme my friend..enjoy with luv ..this big winner...
Brown Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Frank's "Dream" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Nicely done nette. Congratulations on your win in Dreams
Minardi Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 10:27 AM
I couldn't resist the title, Nette. Eye-catched my eyes to read it. Wonderful. Congrats on your win, in Dr. Ram and Frank H contest. Wow, 2 wins in a poem. Greatly written.
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Royal Rhyme" contest Nette. Love,Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 9:47 AM
Congrats Nette luv on another stupendous win with this extraordinary entry as only u can create my friend.. enjoy sweet success luv..
Freeman Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 12:47 AM
Nette, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 11:16 PM
Congrats on the win in my contest, nette
Maverick Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 3:55 PM
Appreicated the way you have sewn this one up Nette..! a real flight of fantasy to enjoy..!
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