More Dazzling

more dazzling
than the diamond pendant---
her deep cleavage
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 2:17 PM
hey, by the way, I understood your soupmail, and I am now taggling!!! Wheeeee. look at me.
Horne Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 12:46 PM
lol, good one, Kash! Congrats on your wins : )
Onclaud Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 8:33 AM
lol, now you are the one having the net glitches, kashi bud!...:) ding dong, i am here!..:) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 12:11 AM
'btw, Happy birthday. I was gonna do a blog and then I saw PD beat me to the punch. I will go there now since it is officially after midnight here now. Luv, andrea
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 12:11 AM
ooh lalalala GOOD ONE
Grisetti Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 9:57 AM
A true gentleman does not tell. An early happy Birthday to you because I have an imperfect memory and might just forget.
Poet Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Thanks Joann!
Ellison Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 7:32 AM
Yee haw! LOVE those deep deep cleavages! LOL
Nair Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 7:21 AM
Enjoyed this deep poem, Kash, hope she doesn't get back ache!! Jag
Onclaud Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 2:45 AM
you are a peeping tom, kashi bud, lol!... greaat element of surprise here.. amazing!:) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 9:54 PM
spoken like a manly man Kash and written with umo too .. suoer visual here luv .. my hubby is grinning from ear to ear .. winner wow
A   Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Hi Kash, what are you going to do on your birthday? About your poem: wow! Your eyes sparkle the right way... :-), I hope the diamond was on a necklace that was lost deep in her cleavage... lol... , enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA
Cheesman Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 7:55 PM
Oh well done Kash......lol - Shaz
Sivey Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 2:49 PM
You write is truly phenomenal my friend! I really enjoyed this incredibly marvelous poem you have written! Fabulous write Kashi, I love this sentimental poem! What a wondrous piece, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 2:02 PM
- You are the master and I'm the student, well done Kash. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Hey Kash, very cool write, a nice image, and nice to read your work again....David
Poet Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 1:18 PM
Thanks David!Glad to see you around again!
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