More Beautiful

Bullfrogs greeted dusk.
Evening clouds cooled the heat waves.
Gathering for night,
Zebra longwings butterflies,
Rested near a moonlit pond.

Gardenia fragrance
Permeated summer air
Contradicting lantana.
Butterflies fluttered.
Drinking their nectar of choice.

Love was also there.
Drifting through eternal dreams.
Uplifting memories…us.
Forever with me.
Reflections upon my life,
Made more beautiful by you.

ã June 2, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest:  Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note 
Sponsor	^Rick Parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:48 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 6:44 PM
ARe you here right now? Please let me know if you are!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 5:13 PM
wow, quite beautiful love note!!!
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