More Babbling From Diiamond Rich

Do you think its disrespectful to curse
on the same lines as the word God
even unaware rambling through society
on a hot plate.
I hoped criminals hooked you like a fish
like the images in my mind last summer
a little to real to be mental illness
It felt like a group of emps got together 
for a pajamma party in my head.
And whats up with all the exploitation of
religous poems; hologram tecnology I 
love star trek smothered with onions 
and volkens on some cloaked rock
Humans shouldn't hurt humans inless its in
self defense, and if so least have the half of
heart to say sorry by f--- you
I'm doubting the whole humanity thing
just like charity just something to make 
me look good, deep down I'm the villin and 
you know it
I'll get it all back at the end of the year anyway
Not all just some, the ones who can turn money
and power into a mind f--- jinxing yourself for
a petty laugh
I use to get high to Marvin Gaye 
wine, the good kind you need a kork for
steak and onions, the good kind you need a knife
and fork for
The midnight whores was knockin on my window
like a heavy hail storm
they never went in from the cold they used the pipe 
to stay warm
yeah I said, the pipe to stay warm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/1/2010 11:53:00 AM
Caviar and wine poetry ... tremendous talent. Thanks for reading my poems
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Date: 8/29/2010 10:48:00 AM
I said Lord forgive when I cussed in the poem and there was God in there. He forgives me and thats all that matters. I am never forsaken only by man.. but if don't approve of you then you are forsaken and then I become the victor.... you guys are great and thank you for your kind comments. Take my poems as you would take any literary books such as: Steven King etc. Have a good day.
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Date: 8/28/2010 10:38:00 AM
This kind of has a bit of "Howl" qualities to it. I like it. Thanks for commenting on my poem "Stars". Love, Susan
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Date: 8/22/2010 11:41:00 PM
Well, yeah, I think to curse is disrespectful (period). And, the criminals would probably hook me like a fish. After all they are criminals! :) You know I have no doubt that there are many hypocrites among us, but then there are also very well meaning folks around as well. I wouldn't focus too much on those who waste time complaining. What is more important is how do I spend my time? Thanks for a thought provoking write. The f... word is not necessary. We read you well. :) Caroline.
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Date: 8/20/2010 11:04:00 PM
your work...brings back memories of back in the day, I hope you will some day be able to say the same. keep on writing on.
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Date: 8/19/2010 9:37:00 AM
babble? yes i totally agree. john
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