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10/9/17 More houses More boundless More guns More funds More drugs More plugs More liquor More, get the picture? More logic More and more profit More of that More A.S.A.P. More gas More cash More in my glass More before I pass More wax More racks More in my cup More of that stuff More tabs More dabs More jars More cars More bars More decks of cards More yards More of living large More of taking charge More paths being carved More firearms More tools More jewels More shoes More booze More clothes More homes More love More of all of the above

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/5/2017 3:40:00 PM

Yes more from the above.Dalton have a nice evening my friend.

Dalton Ogletree
Date: 1/22/2018 11:42:00 AM

Thank you very much Darlene!

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/25/2017 11:08:00 AM

Interesting how this can be interpreted in different ways. And that's the sign of a great poem, when the reader fills in between the lines. I enjoyed your poem, Dalton.

Dalton Ogletree
Date: 1/22/2018 11:42:00 AM

Thank you very much Line Gauthier!