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10/9/17


More houses
More boundless

More guns
More funds

More drugs
More plugs

More liquor
More, get the picture?

More logic
More and more profit

More of that
More A.S.A.P.

More gas
More cash

More in my glass
More before I pass

More wax
More racks

More in my cup
More of that stuff

More tabs
More dabs

More jars
More cars
More bars

More decks of cards
More yards

More of living large
More of taking charge

More paths being carved
More firearms

More tools
More jewels

More shoes
More booze

More clothes
More homes

More love
More of all of the above
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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 3:40 PM
Yes more from the above.Dalton have a nice evening my friend.
Ogletree Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Thank you very much Darlene!
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Interesting how this can be interpreted in different ways. And that's the sign of a great poem, when the reader fills in between the lines. I enjoyed your poem, Dalton.
Ogletree Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Thank you very much Line Gauthier!
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