Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

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How do I explain this feeling
One I fall into everyday
All it takes is to see you
You take clouds from my day

How do I explain the intensity 
One that's deep in my chest
Makes my heart beat faster
And I see life's very best

You make colors more vivid
The suns heat is more intense 
The birds sing a bit sweeter
Words spoken make more sense

The stars glow a bit brighter
Everything is more clear
My steps are a bit lighter
Whenever you are near

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John Hamilton September 25, 2019 at 3:40 PM Wonderfully written, those are very special feeling penned, just lovely! Brenda Chiri September 26, 2019 at 1:46 PM Thank you so much John!;)

Gershon Wolf September 24, 2019 at 3:55 PM Wow. Another FAVE. I remember the last time I really FELL HARD for a young lady. (I was, well, '39.'). And it was exactly as you've penned it. Just love this one. Cheers, Gershon Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 4:01 PM Thank Gershon! That feeling is amazing is it not?;)

Winged Warrior September 23, 2019 at 10:09 PM I'm floating on my tippy toes, Bren...we want more, please...lovely verse sis...bro bro :o) Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 4:52 AM Thank you Bro bro! Lol you are too sweet to your crazy sissy!;)

Regina Mcintosh September 23, 2019 at 7:57 PM This is so beautifully written and such a wonderful poem. I love it and wanted to be sure to send you blessings for it and you. Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 4:51 AM Regina thank you so much!;)

Sandra Adams September 23, 2019 at 7:12 PM i don't think you need to explain it, i think they would feel your glow if they make you feel that wonderful when they are near...it would show...beautiful penning my friend :) hugs Brenda Chiri September 24, 2019 at 4:51 AM Thank you so much my friend! It's an amazing feeling!;)

Chris Green September 23, 2019 at 1:24 PM I think you explain it just the way you did, in a beautiful poem. Really nice and definitely sigh worthy. : ) Brenda Chiri September 23, 2019 at 3:18 PM Thank you chris!;)