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How do I explain this feeling One I fall into everyday All it takes is to see you You take clouds from my day How do I explain the intensity One that's deep in my chest Makes my heart beat faster And I see life's very best You make colors more vivid The suns heat is more intense The birds sing a bit sweeter Words spoken make more sense The stars glow a bit brighter Everything is more clear My steps are a bit lighter Whenever you are near

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John Hamilton

Date: 9/25/2019 3:40:00 PM

Wonderfully written, those are very special feeling penned, just lovely!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/26/2019 1:46:00 PM

Thank you so much John!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/24/2019 3:55:00 PM

Wow. Another FAVE. I remember the last time I really FELL HARD for a young lady. (I was, well, '39.'). And it was exactly as you've penned it. Just love this one. Cheers, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/24/2019 4:01:00 PM

Thank Gershon! That feeling is amazing is it not?;)

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/23/2019 10:09:00 PM

I'm floating on my tippy toes, Bren...we want more, please...lovely verse sis...bro bro :o)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/24/2019 4:52:00 AM

Thank you Bro bro! Lol you are too sweet to your crazy sissy!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/23/2019 7:57:00 PM

This is so beautifully written and such a wonderful poem. I love it and wanted to be sure to send you blessings for it and you.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/24/2019 4:51:00 AM

Regina thank you so much!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/23/2019 7:12:00 PM

i don't think you need to explain it, i think they would feel your glow if they make you feel that wonderful when they are near...it would show...beautiful penning my friend :) hugs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/24/2019 4:51:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend! It's an amazing feeling!;)

Chris Green

Date: 9/23/2019 1:24:00 PM

I think you explain it just the way you did, in a beautiful poem. Really nice and definitely sigh worthy. : )

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/23/2019 3:18:00 PM

Thank you chris!;)