Morbror

I was born watching him rock. His passing away left me in grief and shock. Feels like life got stuck in a dock. Death came home like a hawk. No more escape from the dark Light ain't staying forever in park. For all of life I will remember the date. That nobody runs away from the fate. 24/10/2021

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/5/2025 12:08:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.