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TNT and beans moral army surplus sting~ hunger pain and maim

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/10/2025 6:18:00 AM

Maureen, you have a knack with words and making a point. It's hard to fathom how bad all this has become, but we probably will see some pretty bad things shortly. Ouch for us all, but a personal smiles to you!!

B.J. Fitz

Date: 12/15/2024 8:01:00 PM

I really don't know how you pick the perfect words to so say much with so few words...I also am not sure which way you were going with this after imagining multiple paths, but I like Chris's ANALysis below.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/17/2024 6:43:00 AM

Have been called a word economist, my sieve of a brain lol… this poem a result of my mind imploding having learned about the use cans of food rigged with explosives to maim hungry people. Farts definitely funnier ;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/8/2024 1:07:00 PM

I have heard that beans can cause explosions, I just didn't know they could be that dangerous. : )

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/9/2024 10:46:00 AM

LMAO… literally ;D