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Moor Top Blues

The chilled musty air
                                         tormented the aging stone,
                                             the wailing wind sang.

                                               © Harry J Horsman 1993

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Susan Ashley

November 12, 2017 at 7:20 PM

Harry, such a wonderful haiku of beautiful imagery. Excellent and enjoyed!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 22, 2013 at 9:43 PM

Dear Harry, Congratulations on YOUR 2nd Place well deserved Win in Rick's Contest and Congratulations on YOUR placement in P.D.'s Contest I LOVE Haiku (and Senryu) YOU are quite the Master of the Form. Please no offence but I call Raul Moreno the Sensei of Haiku YOU are defineitly 2nd in Command. Superb Write. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Poet Destroyer A

December 18, 2012 at 12:12 PM

beautiful once again...pd

Poet Destroyer A

December 8, 2012 at 7:13 PM

love the wailing sound it does not bother me... good haiku...pd

Andrea Dietrich

May 11, 2012 at 9:12 PM

hmmm, i searched all page 7 and I believe I saw all those. So next time I will try page six, my friend! Gotta hurry off here soon. have a great weekend.

Kim Merryman

March 21, 2012 at 4:08 PM

Nice haiku, Harry. Congrats on your HM in PD's contest! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 19, 2012 at 6:25 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Harry. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 18, 2012 at 5:23 PM

I see congratulations are in order again. btw, Harry, put your name always on a poem entered into PD's contests. She blogged about it last week. I bet you missed it when you were off for a while. I'm sure that is the only reason this did not place higher.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 16, 2012 at 9:24 PM

congrats Harry luv on an HM for this brilliant Haiku my friend.. luv..

Charlotte Puddifoot

March 16, 2012 at 5:56 PM

hey harry (I like saying that!) congrats on your win in the haiku contest; this is a perfect evocation of wild moorland :-)

Ralph Taylor

March 16, 2012 at 8:39 AM

Congrats on your win, Mate. Outstanding. Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. Best to you and yours. Thanks for you recent comments. Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

March 15, 2012 at 10:57 PM

HARRY, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Barbara Gorelick

June 9, 2010 at 9:01 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest..nice, very, nice. BG

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2010 at 9:10 PM

GREAT imagery and congratulations!

Katherine Stella

June 5, 2010 at 6:00 AM

oh yes sorry missed this one congrats on win outstanding imagery tho sad also thansk for your kind comment on my work keep up the great writing enjoyed

Margaret Foster

June 4, 2010 at 2:10 AM

Congratulations Harry. Good imagery here, wild and barren...good one..Margaret

Linda Milgate

June 3, 2010 at 11:37 PM

This is great, congratulations.

Brandee Augustus

June 3, 2010 at 1:34 PM

This is a perfect poem for all the senses! Congratulations on your second place win with this haiku!

Gert W. Knop

June 3, 2010 at 6:25 AM

Great imagery in your Haiku, Harry!! Thank you for your kind comment on "Days" and have a great time...Gert

Poet Destroyer A

June 3, 2010 at 12:44 AM

just wanted to stop by and thank you for your comment:)

Debbie Guzzi

June 2, 2010 at 5:48 PM

I have been here..on the cliffs of Moher in Ireland. Good one! (Just leave off the periods...haiku's never have periods so the reader can envision the moment going on endlessly in time)

Amy Green

June 2, 2010 at 3:48 PM

Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 2, 2010 at 3:25 PM

Congrats Harry on your second place win in the Haiku You contest with this awesome write.. a wonderful victory and thankxxx for your sweet and special comments on my poetry yesterday ..had eye surgery so could not acknowledge immediately... enjoy your win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"