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Moonwalk Poetry

Let me disclose some top secrets
till date unknown I can sure bet.

First man in moon was not Armstrong
it was just me,History tells wrong.

I was first to do the Moonwalk
which brings Jackson later goodluck.

Jackson called me well in advance
so that I could teach him this dance.

In fact it was me who transformed
Moonwalk to a good,classy dance form.

Don't you think that with Jackson's fame
world should attach  my little name?

You may wonder what I do now---
"Moonwalk Poetry"--Let me tell how.

Take my poems,read them just once
see the words doing  that dance!


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Contest:Ridiculous Self Exaggerations

Sponsor:Susan Burch

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Andrea Dietrich

February 17, 2012 at 10:58 AM

Kash, rereading this one. Yes, my friend, it was GREAT. I saw a few others that I also really enjoyed but did not see on the list. I never went to the gym after all, did I tell you? Oh boy, I am bad. Now i have to leave my house in 15 min. for my movies today and I don't want to get up from here. hahaha

Nette Onclaud

February 16, 2012 at 10:48 AM

yipes, kashi.. i really have to type better.. lol, poor joe; changed the typo... thanks and huggs, buddy!..:)

Don Johnson

February 13, 2012 at 3:30 PM

ya filled the bill an wrote the line, dancing dancin all de time, moonwalk moonwalk, aint no crime ... love it kash

Dinda Minardi

February 13, 2012 at 8:49 AM

Well, this is an interesting respond of Susan's contest. I really enjoyed it, Kash! hahaha.. Excellent in creativity is you are. My old avatar is getting too old, so i changed it with the new one.. ;)

Carrie Richards

February 12, 2012 at 6:37 PM

I'd love to see your moonwalk, dear Kash!! Sliding those feet backwards, just as smooth as you slide your words across the page .................effortless!!! Good one!! (I haven't tackled this contest as yet...oh oh...I'd better hurry! This is hard to beat!)

Michael Poyntz

February 12, 2012 at 5:04 PM

Loved this poem. Great writing! Michael

Sara Kendrick

February 12, 2012 at 12:49 PM

Reads like a winner..Got a chuckle..I wondered who choreographed that dance for MJ..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 12, 2012 at 9:17 AM

cool premise Kash.. luv that moonwalk and kudos for the great write on how it was u and not Armstrong or Jackson luv.. all in the thought projection.. way to go ..oh..

Nette Onclaud

February 12, 2012 at 9:14 AM

math??... me zero when it comes this, lol.. hugs to span; be gentle..:)

Wilma Neels

February 12, 2012 at 8:50 AM

Kash, what an awesome route to go with the theme for the contest :) Wishing you the best for Susan's contest :-)

Nette Onclaud

February 12, 2012 at 8:18 AM

anything new, woohoo kashi?.. span already sleeping again??.. happy sunday and come visit! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

February 11, 2012 at 7:59 PM

wow, you are such a CLEVER guy,this is showing GREAT imagination and creativity, Kash. I was so right to fave you right away after meeting you. BTW, I changed that word just for you in my poem; however, if it were not for the contest, I would keep the other word because I prefer to count syllables the way I "speak" them, and I do not use six syllables for that word! I have always had a big problem with syllable counters forcing us to call words ending in "ically" as 3 syllable. It's "icly"!!!