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Moonwalk Poetry

Let me disclose some top secrets till date unknown I can sure bet. First man in moon was not Armstrong it was just me,History tells wrong. I was first to do the Moonwalk which brings Jackson later goodluck. Jackson called me well in advance so that I could teach him this dance. In fact it was me who transformed Moonwalk to a good,classy dance form. Don't you think that with Jackson's fame world should attach my little name? You may wonder what I do now--- "Moonwalk Poetry"--Let me tell how. Take my poems,read them just once see the words doing that dance! =========================== Contest:Ridiculous Self Exaggerations Sponsor:Susan Burch

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2012 10:58:00 AM

Kash, rereading this one. Yes, my friend, it was GREAT. I saw a few others that I also really enjoyed but did not see on the list. I never went to the gym after all, did I tell you? Oh boy, I am bad. Now i have to leave my house in 15 min. for my movies today and I don't want to get up from here. hahaha

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/16/2012 10:48:00 AM

yipes, kashi.. i really have to type better.. lol, poor joe; changed the typo... thanks and huggs, buddy!..:)

Don Johnson

Date: 2/13/2012 3:30:00 PM

ya filled the bill an wrote the line, dancing dancin all de time, moonwalk moonwalk, aint no crime ... love it kash

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/13/2012 8:49:00 AM

Well, this is an interesting respond of Susan's contest. I really enjoyed it, Kash! hahaha.. Excellent in creativity is you are. My old avatar is getting too old, so i changed it with the new one.. ;)

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/12/2012 6:37:00 PM

I'd love to see your moonwalk, dear Kash!! Sliding those feet backwards, just as smooth as you slide your words across the page .................effortless!!! Good one!! (I haven't tackled this contest as yet...oh oh...I'd better hurry! This is hard to beat!)

Michael Poyntz

Date: 2/12/2012 5:04:00 PM

Loved this poem. Great writing! Michael

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2012 12:49:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Got a chuckle..I wondered who choreographed that dance for MJ..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2012 9:17:00 AM

cool premise Kash.. luv that moonwalk and kudos for the great write on how it was u and not Armstrong or Jackson luv.. all in the thought projection.. way to go ..oh..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/12/2012 9:14:00 AM

math??... me zero when it comes this, lol.. hugs to span; be gentle..:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/12/2012 8:50:00 AM

Kash, what an awesome route to go with the theme for the contest :) Wishing you the best for Susan's contest :-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/12/2012 8:18:00 AM

anything new, woohoo kashi?.. span already sleeping again??.. happy sunday and come visit! :) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2012 7:59:00 PM

wow, you are such a CLEVER guy,this is showing GREAT imagination and creativity, Kash. I was so right to fave you right away after meeting you. BTW, I changed that word just for you in my poem; however, if it were not for the contest, I would keep the other word because I prefer to count syllables the way I "speak" them, and I do not use six syllables for that word! I have always had a big problem with syllable counters forcing us to call words ending in "ically" as 3 syllable. It's "icly"!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/11/2012 5:27:00 PM

8 25 am here, kashi.. are you reviewing span??... :) huggs!