Moonstruck

In total awe he tries to touch the magnificent crescent moon for he had heard a man lived there and yearned to see him soon head held high he searched the sky for that Man in the Moon the boy did espy he was sat astride the moon up above whilst swinging his legs sprinkling moonbeams of love a wink of an eye for the boy to espy, with dreams one day of flying up high the boy now an Astronaut the cosmos he explores a welcome wave from the Man in the Moon as daily his spaceship soars Written 4th May 2019 FIRST PLACE Contest: Free Verse or Rhyme – picture 1 Sponsor: Eve Roper Contest: May 2019 Premier 3 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/6/2019 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on our topo win! Great, inspiring tale, xomo!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/6/2019 10:37:00 AM

Many thanks Maureen glad you liked it and I appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Kevin Fairbrother

Date: 5/6/2019 2:27:00 AM

Congratulations, nice poem, with a sincere message. Cheers, Kev.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/6/2019 2:44:00 AM

Great to hear from you Kev and thank you so much for your lovely comments! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2019 1:29:00 PM

sure a sweet little tale, Ann. Congrats for the great win.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/6/2019 3:10:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea for your lovely comment. I love your poem too - congrats! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2019 12:59:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest ... I knew it, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/5/2019 1:11:00 PM

Yes Anne-Lise you were indeed right , haha... I am delighted with the result and thank you for your congrats and hugs. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/5/2019 11:59:00 AM

Congratulations on a fabulous poem and a well deserved win Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/5/2019 1:08:00 PM

Many thanks Elizabeth so glad you liked it and I am thrilled with my win! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Joseph May

Date: 5/5/2019 11:12:00 AM

Lovely write Ann..Congrats on your win

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/5/2019 11:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Joseph, I really appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/5/2019 12:02:00 AM

Ann, congratulations on your win! I love the emotion of inspiration to succeed in life.. Come visit my blog for the contest.. Hugs Eve

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/5/2019 2:19:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Eve for my win in your contest, I wrote this on Friday night as soon as I returned from a few days away and I am so glad I did not miss your beautifully inspiring contest - thank you Eve, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2019 2:20:00 PM

- This is really a wonderful poem, Ann - I think I can already congratulate you - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/4/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your amazing comments I am so glad you like it! Wishing you too a beautiful weekend with kindest thoughts Ann xx