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Moonstone Melodies Premiere Contest Winner

As darkness descended on our valley - deleting purple and violet from the sky - my beloved and I lay upon a blanket soon gazing at myriads of twinkling stars that pulsed their pearlescent shine as if to music. Goddess Luna showed herself full-faced - lovely, round and luminescent. Immersing us in summer’s nocturnal sounds, a chorus of katydids and crickets were singing to their mates with chirps and trills. My love declared that nature was crooning a melody just for me! Then playfully he said he wished to snatch some stars down from the sky. He’d string them together, fashioning them into a pretty necklace that would sparkle against my alabaster skin. He looked up at the moon then, teasing me again with his sweet words - that if he could, he’d capture moonbeams and press them into a stone that shone as brightly as my eyes were glowing that precious night. That gem he would set inside a silver ring. Serenading me, he’d place it on my hand. I would be the Goddess Luna, and forever we would radiate our love for each other - resplendent like the shining moonstone on my finger, and together we would reign with me beside him as his gleaming queen.

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Date: 11/20/2024 11:00:00 AM
So lovely and serene, Andrea. Really a jewel and a gem of a poem with striking imagery and a rainbow of moonstruck color! Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/20/2024 11:05:00 AM
thanks so much. I had a ball writing this one.
Date: 11/15/2024 6:58:00 AM
Woww, such beautiful romance... enjoyed reading dear sweet Ria. Also, from comments below I understand that this got a trophy win... Well deserved my dear friend...Congratulations.. This is a FAV. Hugs... ~ Ani
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/15/2024 8:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, sweet friend
Date: 11/14/2024 9:10:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to Poetry Contest TOPPER. Enjoy Good Days. Love.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/15/2024 8:20:00 AM
Thanks, Anisha
Date: 11/13/2024 6:13:00 PM
Oh gosh! The ultimate romantic poem! Warmest congratulations on your inevitable trophy win, Andrea and I’m marking this as a fav too, absolutely marvellous!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2024 6:33:00 PM
wow, so glad you like it, and thanks again for my win in your contest.
Date: 11/13/2024 12:46:00 PM
Well done Andrea for your well deserved contest winner. Xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2024 4:22:00 PM
Thanks for your kind remark
Date: 11/13/2024 11:52:00 AM
- A pleasure to read your winning poem, congratulations Andrea :) - hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2024 4:23:00 PM
Thanks, dear
Date: 11/13/2024 10:29:00 AM
He was on full romance. And your discription on full poet.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2024 4:23:00 PM
Too bad this was just a fantasy!
Date: 11/13/2024 7:15:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I really loved this poem, I did not expect a romantic poem from you this time, altho yes you do romance sometimes, i really love the flow of this, flow of a poem is very important for me, and the way youv painted imagery and written one that is so moon-kissed, is beyond impeccable! Oh to be forever the Goddess luna, adorned with moonstones is such a captivating tale, everything about this made my heart melt, so beautiful! So seamless, and such elegance! Congratulations on your win! FAVE this is!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2024 9:27:00 AM
Thanks so much. I really had fun with the theme, Ink. And romance is all that came to me.
Date: 11/12/2024 3:30:00 PM
Lovely! I could picture the magic of stars and love..<3
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2024 4:23:00 PM
Thanks, Paige
Date: 11/12/2024 2:45:00 PM
Andrea, a very loving and pleasant scene. You're making me smile.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2024 4:24:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 11/12/2024 10:35:00 AM
ohhh, a shimmer of a poesy! got new soupie for you...huggs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/13/2024 4:24:00 PM
Thanks, my friend
Date: 11/12/2024 12:51:00 AM
true sentiments are the best for any couple, this is beautifully written, and very touching, thanks poet Andrea enjoy your day
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Date: 11/11/2024 11:42:00 AM
A Beautiful poem Andrea strung together with love. God bless.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/11/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, John
Date: 11/11/2024 11:40:00 AM
- A romantic and beautiful poem, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/11/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise
Date: 11/11/2024 10:52:00 AM
A beautiful love poem. You deserve these nice celestial gifts.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/11/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Jay
Date: 11/11/2024 10:42:00 AM
So many sweet words here.. I hope you will enjoy being the Goddess Luna..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/11/2024 11:52:00 AM
Don't think that will ever happen. Haha
Date: 11/11/2024 9:47:00 AM
I love your imagination in creating this theme of gifts and appreciation for moonbeam rings and a Star made necklace. Being showered with gifts from your beloved. Such nice thoughts Andrea you deserve these wonderful gifts. God bless you. Hugs...
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/11/2024 6:12:00 PM
yes but still they would be nice to see you wear...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/11/2024 11:52:00 AM
Thanks. All just imagination of course

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