Premiere Contest WinnerMoonstone Melodies

As darkness descended on our valley -
deleting purple and violet from the sky -
my beloved and I lay upon a blanket
soon gazing at myriads of twinkling stars
that pulsed their pearlescent shine as if to music.
Goddess Luna showed herself full-faced -
lovely, round and luminescent.

Immersing us in summer’s nocturnal sounds,
a chorus of katydids and crickets
were singing to their mates with chirps and trills.
My love declared that nature was crooning
a melody just for me!

Then playfully he said he wished 
to snatch some stars down from the sky.
He’d string them together, 
fashioning them into a pretty necklace 
that would sparkle against my alabaster skin.

He looked up at the moon then,
teasing me again with his sweet words -
that if he could, he’d capture moonbeams
and press them into a stone
that shone as brightly as
my eyes were glowing that precious night.
That gem he would set inside a silver ring.
Serenading me, he’d place it on my hand.
I would be the Goddess Luna, and forever
we would radiate our love for each other -
resplendent like the shining moonstone on my finger,
and together we would reign
with me beside him as his gleaming queen.
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Kauffman Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 11:00 AM
So lovely and serene, Andrea. Really a jewel and a gem of a poem with striking imagery and a rainbow of moonstruck color! Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 11:05 AM
thanks so much. I had a ball writing this one.
Jayasankar Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Woww, such beautiful romance... enjoyed reading dear sweet Ria. Also, from comments below I understand that this got a trophy win... Well deserved my dear friend...Congratulations.. This is a FAV. Hugs... ~ Ani
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 8:20 AM
Thanks so much, sweet friend
Dutta Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 9:10 PM
BIG CONGRATS to Poetry Contest TOPPER. Enjoy Good Days. Love.
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2024 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, Anisha
Seeker Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 6:13 PM
Oh gosh! The ultimate romantic poem! Warmest congratulations on your inevitable trophy win, Andrea and I’m marking this as a fav too, absolutely marvellous!
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 6:33 PM
wow, so glad you like it, and thanks again for my win in your contest.
Read Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 12:46 PM
Well done Andrea for your well deserved contest winner. Xx
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 4:22 PM
Thanks for your kind remark
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 11:52 AM
- A pleasure to read your winning poem, congratulations Andrea :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 4:23 PM
Thanks, dear
Loving Iii Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 10:29 AM
He was on full romance. And your discription on full poet.
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 4:23 PM
Too bad this was just a fantasy!
Empress Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 7:15 AM
Dear Andrea, I really loved this poem, I did not expect a romantic poem from you this time, altho yes you do romance sometimes, i really love the flow of this, flow of a poem is very important for me, and the way youv painted imagery and written one that is so moon-kissed, is beyond impeccable! Oh to be forever the Goddess luna, adorned with moonstones is such a captivating tale, everything about this made my heart melt, so beautiful! So seamless, and such elegance! Congratulations on your win! FAVE this is!
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Thanks so much. I really had fun with the theme, Ink. And romance is all that came to me.
Hind Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Lovely! I could picture the magic of stars and love..<3
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 4:23 PM
Thanks, Paige
Beaufort Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 2:45 PM
Andrea, a very loving and pleasant scene. You're making me smile.
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Thank you
Onclaud Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 10:35 AM
ohhh, a shimmer of a poesy! got new soupie for you...huggs
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Thanks, my friend
Rolland Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 12:51 AM
true sentiments are the best for any couple, this is beautifully written, and very touching, thanks poet Andrea enjoy your day
Read Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:42 AM
A Beautiful poem Andrea strung together with love. God bless.
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:53 AM
Thanks, John
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:40 AM
- A romantic and beautiful poem, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:53 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise
Narain Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 10:52 AM
A beautiful love poem. You deserve these nice celestial gifts.
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:53 AM
Thanks, Jay
One Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 10:42 AM
So many sweet words here.. I hope you will enjoy being the Goddess Luna..
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:52 AM
Don't think that will ever happen. Haha
Tor Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 9:47 AM
I love your imagination in creating this theme of gifts and appreciation for moonbeam rings and a Star made necklace. Being showered with gifts from your beloved. Such nice thoughts Andrea you deserve these wonderful gifts. God bless you. Hugs...
Tor Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 6:12 PM
yes but still they would be nice to see you wear...
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:52 AM
Thanks. All just imagination of course
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