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Moonstone Melodies

A translucent bluish-white mineral with a mysterious sheen I hear them rustling behind heaven's plisse, fabric seersucker curtains, opaque but unlaced One breath and suddenly I'm a teleported being letting go of all faculties and senses; A prayer on the lips searching for everlasting hope. These precious substances of color and charm both calm and confident, ignite the soul and usher it to peace, love, and harmony. Filled with Goddess energy exuding warm tones of luminescent, ephemeral light the hand receives what the eyes have encased lost inside clairaudient auditory movements Moonstone Melodies; Yokiko reveries fill me like no other listen to the sound they make Angels dressed in crinoline gowns, swooshing and spreading light everywhere... Lost in their chime like sound of tinkling glass they are un-comparable, A thousand stars of heaven could never compare to these moonstone gems, who seem to claim the heart bit by bit and then, all at once.

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Date: 11/13/2024 11:59:00 AM
- Vie Rose, a pleasure to read your winning poem, congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 11/13/2024 7:39:00 AM
Dear rose, this is absolutely gorgeous, how youv woven on that is so celestial, and cosmically warming to the soul, the soulful depth of this poem as well as your wordplay here really stood out for me! I also love the way your words flow in such eloquence, i especially love the way youv started the poem as well as how youv written “ Lost in their chime like sound of tinkling glass they are un-comparable, “ so melodious and such divine rhythm in your poem, youv done an exquisite job! Congratulations, thank you for sharing
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Date: 11/13/2024 9:07:00 AM
thank you for placing me with such high honor Ink, I really appreciate it, luv
Date: 11/8/2024 8:42:00 AM
I find this poem worthy of a longer comment considering there is such beauty in its composition. It inspires me to higher thoughts.
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Date: 11/8/2024 10:10:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts Victor
Date: 11/7/2024 11:25:00 PM
this is quite inspiring and beautiful, didn't know about moonstones, thanks poet, enjoyed
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Date: 11/8/2024 10:10:00 AM
The are such beauties and they own healing properties too Yann
Date: 11/7/2024 5:55:00 AM
Dear Rose, Wow, you beautifully captured the ethereal essence of moonstones. I really felt your words danced between realms, evoking a transcendent journey through luminous veils of perception. Such extraordinary spiritual depth invites me to embrace the mystical allure of those enchanting gems. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/7/2024 7:36:00 AM
I so appreciate your length beautiful comment dear Daniel, may Autumn by yours this year with all its multi splendors. :)
Date: 11/6/2024 10:56:00 AM
nice poem
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Date: 11/6/2024 12:53:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by Jay, if you check out the link to the video, you'll see where the inspiration came from :)
Date: 11/6/2024 9:54:00 AM
https://www.google.ca/search?q=what+does+a+moonstone+melody+sound+like&sca_esv=c263faa809bdb49e&ei=
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