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Moonstone Eyes

Moonstone eyes hardened by life Full of fight despite tears you cry You see hate when we see faith Your time will come be not afraid Look inside and see destiny Look outside and find peace In the storms raging seas Walk through thick and deep Cloudy times from evil winds Know that in time we all sin Some lessons learned not easy to grow Be of good faith for God is in control

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Silent One

Date: 11/9/2024 11:10:00 AM

Hey Karen, your poem is an uplifting reminder to persevere through difficult times with faith and inner strength. Your use of nature and spiritual references gives the poem a timeless, universal appeal, inviting readers to reflect on the sources of resilience and faith in their own lives. Through its gentle encouragement and reflective tone, the poem leaves the reader with a sense of hope and a reminder of the enduring power of faith, even amid life’s “cloudy times.”

Karen Jones
Date: 11/9/2024 1:16:00 PM

What a wonderful compliment Silent One! I appreciate you sharing such sunny words that warm me and bring smiles! You made my day!

John Read

Date: 11/9/2024 5:12:00 AM

Hi Karen, now days it's hard to avoid sin,thankfully God understands that we're only human. God bless you. Xx

Karen Jones
Date: 11/9/2024 1:14:00 PM

Amen John! God bless you too and thanks for stopping by!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/8/2024 1:04:00 PM

Dear talented soul, karen, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem that flows with so much depth! I really loved “Look outside and find peace In the storms raging seas Walk through thick and deep” soulfully moving and brilliant title! Youv used brilliant metaphors and sublime rhymes in this! Pleasure reading you always~ sending you light

Karen Jones
Date: 11/8/2024 1:16:00 PM

Dearest Inky you inspired this one with your creative word moonstone! Thanks for the creative nudge!

Michael Tor

Date: 11/8/2024 5:09:00 AM

Amen Karen, this one really resonated with me. A favorite, thank you for posting and enjoy the rest of your day...

Karen Jones
Date: 11/8/2024 7:28:00 AM

I’m sorry I missed this kind comment Michael! So honored you fav it! Thank you!