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Moonsong

The moon sat, plunked in a cobalt sky punctuating the stratus a wane full note on a blank scale resonating, pulsating, pregnant in it’s fullness and the string was plucked.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2009 6:06:00 PM
Hey Deborah! Love this one too, "punctuating the stratus"..sits there like the point at the end of a sentence, notes on a scale. I was thinking at first, 'stratosphere'...but now I do see it as "note(s)on a blank scale". You make me smile...this is wonderfully clever! Blessings to you! Mikki
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Date: 2/8/2009 6:02:00 PM
Beautiful write.
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