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Moonshiner's Ditty - Collaboration

MOONSHINER'S DITTY - Collaboration

Gonna drink moonshine
Get drunk as a skunk
Then go into town
Beat up on some punk

Get thrown in jail 
'Til I get sobered up
Start drinking again
Then puke it all up

23 July 2018
For Charles Messina's contest

(Make this the last stanza)

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Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2018 at 4:19 PM

Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara

Gershon Wolf

August 28, 2018 at 5:46 PM

Curtis, I read your poem---and let out a loud burp! LOL. Congrats on your win in the contest. Best always, Gershon

Curtis Moorman

August 28, 2018 at 7:59 PM

Okay, Gershon, as long as it was only a burp!! lol Thanks for the congrats.

Eve Roper

August 28, 2018 at 3:15 PM

Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Curtis...Congratulations on your win!

Curtis Moorman

August 28, 2018 at 3:30 PM

Thanks, Eve! The annals of my mind -- who woulda thought?

Charles Messina

August 28, 2018 at 8:33 AM

Curtis, I absolutely love the stanza you added. It would have ranked higher if you included the entire poem. This is a perfect fit to ending of the poem and I may have to include it into the song that was made from it. If it's okay with you that is. Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your placement my dear friend. Blessings :) Charlie

Curtis Moorman

August 28, 2018 at 8:43 AM

Charlie, as is my bent, I end up not reading all the instructions. I didn't realize I needed to tag it onto the end of your poem and only sent what I thought you may want to add. You certainly have my permission to include it in the song that was made from it. Thanks for the placement and the consideration for using my entry.

Eve Roper

July 23, 2018 at 5:45 PM

Hahahaha... with will be one of the best lines for the contest, Curtis....

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