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Moonshiners Ditty Collaboration

Moonshiners Ditty By; Charles Messina Collaboration Gonna wake up At the brink of dawn Take a shower Throw my blue jeans on The little red rooster Is my alarm Cock-a-doodle doodling On my farm Gonna water All of my crops Especially My barley and hops Gonna spread out All the bales of hay Where the goats and the horses And the cattle stay In the pasture Down by the creek Where we went When we wanted to sneak A little moonshine I stole it from my dad The best damn moonshine That I ever had I'm gonna go And see a little rodeo Then I'm going dancing To do the do-si-doe Then I'll stop by Over near the school To jump in the river In our swimming pool Gonna get my little lady A cold bottle of wine And get myself a bottle Of my dad's moonshine She decline the bottle of wine made a beeline to dad's moonshine by the end of the night she was mine 7/22/2018 Poetry Contest: Add a Stanza to My Poem 4.Moonshiners Ditty By; Charles Messina Collaboration Sponsored By: Charles Messina

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Date: 8/29/2018 4:16:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 8/28/2018 8:13:00 AM
Eve, I love the stanza you added to my poem. This poem has been made into a song and I might have to consider adding your stanza to it. Wonderful! Thank you for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win... :) Charlie
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/28/2018 2:59:00 PM
thank you for the honor
Date: 8/28/2018 3:55:00 AM
Very humorous addition, Eve. Congrats
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Date: 7/29/2018 3:04:00 PM
Ohh, great line "by the end of the night she was mine," how tantalizing! (btw I posted a 'thank you' to my poetrysoup pals so I hope you check it out!)
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:22:00 AM
Great collaboration Eve...
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Date: 7/23/2018 3:12:00 PM
This poem is outstanding - you and Charles outdid yourselves in this collaboration. It is so witty and lyrical that I would love to hear it put to music! Love it - definitely a fave for me! Hugs and love. Pandita
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Charles Messina
Date: 8/28/2018 8:16:00 AM
This one was put to music by a band from Sweden. It is done in sort of a rock-n-roll style and it has a wonderful beat to it. Thank you Pandita!
Date: 7/22/2018 7:20:00 PM
Very entertaining. Had me smiling all the way through. Just a little of that "who shot john" will do the trick. Some of that stuff will make you cuss your mother:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/22/2018 7:24:00 PM
Hahaha... Hugs Eve

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