Moonpie

If I could take a bite out of the moon
I’d swallow become pregnant and bloom
I’d glow like the sun ray across the sea
Anticipating how your love moves me

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Regina Elliott

Date: 4/26/2024 11:01:00 AM

A romantic and charming poem, dear Karen. I have to stay away from the baked goods Moon Pies, they put weight on me, lol! A lovely write. God's loving blessings to you. ~

Karen Jones
Date: 4/26/2024 1:44:00 PM

thanks and God bless you Regina!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/17/2024 1:45:00 AM

Your imagination excels. Clever metaphors and imagery.

Karen Jones
Date: 4/17/2024 2:00:00 AM

Thank you dear poet hugs Victor!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/15/2024 10:51:00 AM

Great imagination in these few lines, Karen. Love the title. SuZ

Karen Jones
Date: 4/15/2024 11:04:00 AM

Thanks Suz!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/13/2024 7:46:00 PM

Really like the playfulness of this one, Karen. Quite an imagination you have. Then again, hope your eyes aren't too much bigger than your stomach... lol. Adorable poem. ~ Gershon

Karen Jones
Date: 4/13/2024 8:02:00 PM

You are kind dear Gershon lol. Thanks

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/12/2024 7:43:00 AM

A nurturing poem that I enjoyed for its clever metaphors.

Karen Jones
Date: 4/12/2024 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Hilda!

Robert Schatz

Date: 4/11/2024 11:06:00 PM

Another beauty Karen. Really sweet. I feel like it has a vibe similar Kinte's Kiss. Directed toward the same the person, perhaps?

Karen Jones
Date: 4/12/2024 3:04:00 AM

Thanks! Robert Kinte calls me and often we talk for hours. I wrote these short poems at the same time he was chatting my ear off lol! And one he told me a title and I wrote from that it’s Strange Things! I was not able to concentrate or write much as Kinte enjoys distracting me lol but not with malice. So yes it was directed towards my LA friend I have yet to meet!