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Moonmance

'Neath a moonlit sky stardust glittered 'round two lovers when their lips touched


Stardust Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: JCB Brul 
4/19/2023

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Brian Sambourne

July 15, 2023 at 2:27 PM

Very nicely penned, Charles. Romance is a must in our troubled world. Be well. Brian

Charles Messina

July 16, 2023 at 12:45 PM

Thank you, Brian. Indeed, this world is troublesome, romance can be fitting for sure. Have a great week! Charlie

Gershon Wolf

May 17, 2023 at 6:43 PM

Lip-locker!

Brian Sambourne

May 15, 2023 at 1:50 PM

A strong, vivid image, Charles. A Monoku that fits well with spring passion. I hope that you are fit + healthy. Cheers, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

April 30, 2023 at 4:15 PM

how very clever this is, Charles. Big congrats for your win

Mike Gentile

April 30, 2023 at 6:04 AM

Charlie, your moonlit Monoku glitters as well, Happy Sunday !

Sotto Poet

April 29, 2023 at 11:25 AM

Congratulations on writing such a beautiful poem that manages to combine the mystique of stardust with the wisdom of thought and the elegance of poetry.

Paula Goldsmith

April 29, 2023 at 10:49 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write in a few words. I love this one. Have a great/blessed weekend............

Sam Kauffman

April 29, 2023 at 10:17 AM

Magical Charlie! Love with a sprinkling of magical stardust. This is an enchanting, and very romantic, picture. Congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend!