Joseph May Poet Lay

Moonlit Strolls - Lei

On moonlit strolls along the beach
   Ardor is never out of reach 

 To rhythmic waves two lovers dance
 And ignite the flames of romance

  Then love completes the hearts desire
   A timeless treasure to acquire

 Love has delight enough for two
 And lights the path for hearts so true

 1-3-2020
 Lay It On Me - 8X8 Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Eve Roper January 16, 2020 at 10:07 PM Beautiful verse, Joseph, congratulations your win. Eve

Gershon Wolf January 16, 2020 at 6:36 PM Just sweet as sugar you've penned this romantic fling, Joseph. Congrats! Best wishes, Gershon Joseph May January 16, 2020 at 8:12 PM Thank you Gershon..

Connie Marcum Wong January 16, 2020 at 5:33 PM Romance and nature go hand-in-hand don’t they my friend? You have expressed this beautifully in your poem. Congratulations on your deserving first place win. xxoo Joseph May January 16, 2020 at 8:11 PM They do indeed Connie..thanks

Jan Allison January 16, 2020 at 10:32 AM Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx Joseph May January 16, 2020 at 8:11 PM Thank you Jan

Charles Messina January 16, 2020 at 7:11 AM Such a beautiful romantic piece, Joseph. So well done! Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie Joseph May January 16, 2020 at 11:49 AM Thank you for my placement Charles

Silent One January 4, 2020 at 9:36 AM sounds lovely.. Joseph May January 16, 2020 at 8:10 PM Thank you Silent

Jennifer Proxenos January 4, 2020 at 8:12 AM Hi Joseph, definitely my type of poetry - great write and creative. Blessings, Jennifer. Joseph May January 16, 2020 at 8:10 PM Thank you Jennifer

Vijay Pandit January 4, 2020 at 7:50 AM Excellent verses of love and romance, Joseph--loved the rhythm and flow. Joseph May January 16, 2020 at 8:09 PM Thank you Vijay

Brandy Nicole January 3, 2020 at 10:14 PM "Lovers dance and ignite the flames of romance" Ahhh, yes- while lingering in the moonlight, as the waves crash. Playful moments shared indeed. :) Brandy Joseph May January 16, 2020 at 8:08 PM Thank you Brandy

Jan Allison January 3, 2020 at 6:04 PM oh so beautiful and romantic Joseph, we often go for moonlight walks, sometimes near the sea:-) hugs jan xx Joseph May January 3, 2020 at 6:18 PM Thanks Jan, that's nice to go on moonlight walks..hugs