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Moonlit Silhouette

veiled in moonlight I see your contour I draw your lines as they oscillate with every breath barely visible if not for the subtlety of your steady and unfaltering rhythmic breathing like a soothing wave undulating with your pulse sweet silent murmur AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on February 9, 2019 for STANDARD CONTEST 175 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 2/11/2019 11:18:00 AM
Oo! Nice! A gentle, quiet picture of your Beloved! Reminds me of when I used to wake up, and just watch my Laurie, breathing. Only then, could I go back to sleep!
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Date: 2/11/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and touching comment, Andrew.
Date: 2/10/2019 2:48:00 AM
Very romantic verse Line, good luck. Tom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/9/2019 11:02:00 PM
A tender and loving set of images beautifully and sensitively worded. Well done, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2019 6:59:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Geoffrey.
Date: 2/9/2019 5:00:00 PM
Line, do you know how many words I had to look up, lol well written my friend
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2019 7:13:00 PM
LOL Bobby.

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