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MOONLIT SILHOUETTE



Veiled in moonlight
I see your contour
I draw your lines 
As they oscillate
With every breath
Barely visible
If not for the subtlety 
Of your rhythmic breathing
Steady and unfaltering
Like a soothing wave
Undulating with your pulse
A sweet silent murmur



Submitted on February 9, 2019, for STANDARD CONTEST 175 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Date: 2/11/2019 11:18:00 AM
Oo! Nice! A gentle, quiet picture of your Beloved! Reminds me of when I used to wake up, and just watch my Laurie, breathing. Only then, could I go back to sleep!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/11/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and touching comment, Andrew.
Date: 2/10/2019 12:49:00 PM
This is what I call "lush", Line...and quite lovely.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2019 1:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jim, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 2/10/2019 7:44:00 AM
sensual and misty, behind the veil but potent enjoyed, a lot, ElsaRosee
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2019 10:21:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Elsa.
Date: 2/10/2019 2:48:00 AM
Very romantic verse Line, good luck. Tom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/9/2019 11:02:00 PM
A tender and loving set of images beautifully and sensitively worded. Well done, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2019 6:59:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Geoffrey.
Date: 2/9/2019 5:00:00 PM
Line, do you know how many words I had to look up, lol well written my friend
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2019 7:13:00 PM
LOL Bobby.