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Moonlit Pond

Shall I take you down amongst the reeds of the pond to watch the moonlight illuminate your essence so that I might bathe in it. TLH © 05-30-2012

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Date: 5/31/2012 1:03:00 PM
Good Tanka tania.Enjoyed.
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Date: 5/31/2012 11:48:00 AM
I enjoyed it...think it's pretty good. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 5/31/2012 11:35:00 AM
Ok, I am learning, which why I like it here in the Soup. Apparently my Tankas are not in true for. My lines wrap together rather than individual ideas, so it's back to the drawing board....Hope you enjoy them anyway....Thanks Tanya
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