Moonlit Pond

Shall I take you down
amongst the reeds of the pond
to watch the moonlight
illuminate your essence
so that I might bathe in it.


TLH  ©  05-30-2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 31, 2012 at 1:03 PM
Good Tanka tania.Enjoyed.
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May 31, 2012 at 11:48 AM
I enjoyed it...think it's pretty good. Good luck in the contest!
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May 31, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Ok, I am learning, which why I like it here in the Soup. Apparently my Tankas are not in true for. My lines wrap together rather than individual ideas, so it's back to the drawing board....Hope you enjoy them anyway....Thanks Tanya
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