Moonlit ocean
Walking on sandy grains,
I gazed beside, mirror so vast.
Maybe, the door to celestial realm.
No, my friend it's just the moonlit ocean.
~Byeol
__________________________________________________________________________________________explaination: this poem explore the human tendency to seek transcendence and meaning in our experiences. The poet initial intereperation of moonlight ocean as "door to celestial realm" reflects our innate desire to connect with something greater. However, the poet humble conclusion "just the moonlit ocean" acknowledges the importance of grounding in reality. This poem invite readers to contemplate the delicate balance between seeking meaning and embracing simplicity of present moment.
Copyright © Byeol Captain | Year Posted 2025
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