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Moonlit Night

MOONLIT NIGHT The city Tar-top roof With a brick-few, short wall And then – central This little, round, beat up old table Cheap wine bottle atop Empty Two plastic cups Two bent folding chairs Assorted junk everywhere Our lovers long gone And so their western song The Moon? Oh just the same Lingers on City fumes too Red neck rendezvous

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/31/2012 9:05:00 PM
hey, I could have sworn I saw this before. Oh, I bet at the other site!! Just love how you called it a red neck rendezvous, Daver!
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Date: 7/25/2012 7:14:00 AM
Oie, this doesn't sound like the most romatic night one might wish to envision, Daver! A very descriptive write, don't want to be there though! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 7/24/2012 12:46:00 PM
Just the same "old" moon......well done Daver. - oxox Anne-Lise
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