Moonlit Dreams

Behind shuttered eyes Visions of a mystic place Drifting aimlessly Somewhere out in nether space Moonlit dreams caress my face In his golden halls Hypnos sits upon his throne Master of my mind My dreams are not mine alone Moonlit dreams by his hand sown
Hypnos Greek god of sleep 11/24/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:45 PM
I see you got a win for this GREAT tanka. Congratulations, Bob.
Quigley Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Andrea
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Thank you Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 2:38 AM
Congratulations on your win x
Quigley Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 8:13 AM
Thanks for stopping by Mandy
Scripca Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Wonderful poem you created here, dear Bob! Congratulations on your win! Happy Holidays! iolanda
Quigley Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 10:05 PM
And Happy Holidays to you as well. Thanks for stopping by Iolanda
Puddifoot Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 4:30 PM
a slightly different take on the theme with this 'hypnotic' piece, congrats!
Quigley Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 10:05 PM
Thank you Charlotte
Haick Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Bob! Fantastic imagery...truly enjoyed! Love, Annalise
Quigley Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Annalise
Williams Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 10:25 AM
Bob congrats on your win, nice take with this one, enjoyed..David
Quigley Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 10:48 AM
Thank you David
Eastman Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 6:34 AM
I really love this Tanka poem. Well done!
Quigley Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 7:58 AM
Many thanks Carol
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 10:56 AM
wow, this is one of THE best I've read in this tanka contest. LOVE it, Bob.
Quigley Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Andrea. That means a lot
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