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Moonlit Dreams

Behind shuttered eyes Visions of a mystic place Drifting aimlessly Somewhere out in nether space Moonlit dreams caress my face In his golden halls Hypnos sits upon his throne Master of my mind My dreams are not mine alone Moonlit dreams by his hand sown
Hypnos Greek god of sleep 11/24/2011

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Date: 12/8/2011 11:45:00 PM
I see you got a win for this GREAT tanka. Congratulations, Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/9/2011 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 12/6/2011 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/6/2011 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 12/5/2011 2:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win x
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/5/2011 8:13:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Mandy
Date: 12/4/2011 5:03:00 PM
Wonderful poem you created here, dear Bob! Congratulations on your win! Happy Holidays! iolanda
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/4/2011 10:05:00 PM
And Happy Holidays to you as well. Thanks for stopping by Iolanda
Date: 12/4/2011 4:30:00 PM
a slightly different take on the theme with this 'hypnotic' piece, congrats!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/4/2011 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte
Date: 12/4/2011 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Bob! Fantastic imagery...truly enjoyed! Love, Annalise
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/4/2011 3:00:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Annalise
Date: 12/4/2011 10:25:00 AM
Bob congrats on your win, nice take with this one, enjoyed..David
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/4/2011 10:48:00 AM
Thank you David
Date: 11/25/2011 6:34:00 AM
I really love this Tanka poem. Well done!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/25/2011 7:58:00 AM
Many thanks Carol
Date: 11/24/2011 10:56:00 AM
wow, this is one of THE best I've read in this tanka contest. LOVE it, Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/24/2011 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. That means a lot

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