Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

Moonlit Diamonds

Moonlit diamonds light up the sky,
Giving me pause, as I think no thoughts.
Letting me rest,
My dendrites close their eyes and lie down,
Happily resting into the loveliness of the night.
 
Time for thinking is over.
No cares, no worries,
As the stars take over the earth,
The soothing of the planet begins.
A nightly ritual, worth its weight in diamonds.
 
I stare at the sky, at peace, knowing
All is being taken care of.
I am in charge of nothing.
Not even me.
I can be called back
At any time.
 
It is a peaceful feeling.
I take a deep breath,
Feeling loved and happy.
Diamond night,
Thank you.

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M. L. Kiser November 6, 2018 at 10:43 AM "Diamond night"; wonderful idea and imagery. Caren Krutsinger November 6, 2018 at 11:32 AM Thank you M.L. You are in a "reading mood" today, and I am having trouble keeping up with you. Thank you for appreciating my stuff!

Winged Warrior November 1, 2018 at 7:37 AM Diamonds are forever...especially if moonlit lol...lovely write Caren...love & light...^WW^ Caren Krutsinger November 1, 2018 at 10:25 AM Thank you Winged Warrior. I appreciate your stop by.

Wren Rushing November 1, 2018 at 6:24 AM Beautifully written Caren. Caren Krutsinger November 1, 2018 at 6:47 AM Thank you Wren. I was looking at the stars, in amazement, as I do every night and I said "hey, this could be poetic!"

CayCay Godwin November 1, 2018 at 5:45 AM Not only is it comforting truly believing that despite appearances all things are in divine order, but there's extra comfort with the night skies sorta tuck the belief in. Very nice, Caren - indeed. All the best ... CayCay Caren Krutsinger November 1, 2018 at 6:48 AM Thank you CayCay. There is nothing like the night sky to instantly transform me into a spirit being who does not have any worries at all.

Mahtab Bangalee November 1, 2018 at 5:43 AM awesome writings Caren Krutsinger November 1, 2018 at 6:48 AM Thank you Mahtab. I certainly do appreciate it.

Rhona Mcferran November 1, 2018 at 4:09 AM This whole poem is lovely... but the part that caught my attention is, "I stare at the sky, at peace, knowing/ All is being taken care of./ I am in charge of nothing./ Not even me." What a beautiful, peaceful thought!! Love this, my friend! ;) Caren Krutsinger November 1, 2018 at 6:49 AM The prenaturalness of space and sky always overwhelms me in complete love and bliss, Rhona.

Sand Blown November 1, 2018 at 2:33 AM never really thought about where the light comes from in 'diamond sky'... nice one Caren Krutsinger November 1, 2018 at 6:50 AM Thank you Sand, and hopefully you will remember tonight.