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Moonlit

gentle ripples lapping the shore
in a moonlit waterlily garden
bathing under the stars
while faeries’ luminescent wings 
flutter against the black velvet sky
dreams do come true



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on March 11, 2019 for contest MARCH 19 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Carber Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 9:46 AM
A belated (had some health issues) congrats on your win, Line
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Thank you so much, LJ. Hope you're all better.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 12:49 AM
Congratulations, Line on your fine win. Great poem -dreams do come true-sometimes.
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 9:50 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Most appreciated.
Smith Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Excellent imagery Line, congrats. :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 7:34 PM
Thank you so much, Gary.
Roper Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line, fantastic write. hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 7:34 PM
Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:38 AM
Simply enchanting and worthy of your first placement Line. Kudos! xoxo
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 8:25 AM
Thank you so much, Connie, Most appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Love the imagery of this one and the magic of the last line...May it be so!! ~ Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
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