Moonlight Walk

A night in fall
nice and crisp
great four a stroll.
You grab your ladies hand
as you stroll down the sand.
You stop and gaze
at the stary sky
as you walk at a leisurely pace.
The crickets and frogs peacefully
serenade young lovers
as the moonlight rays
glisten from the waves.
A cool fall breeze
rustles the fall leaves.  
A wise old owl 
gives you a hello
As you pass him by. 
The sand is dry
as your feet imply.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 17, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Beautiful Michael, this is one of my faves from you. SKAT
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February 19, 2014 at 6:20 AM
Thanks Skat glad you like it. I am sorry it has taken so long to reply but I have met someone that I want to spend every day and every hour with. I will be posting a blog about what's happening with me.
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February 8, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Michael What a beautifully creative write. It is so serene and descriptive, I am transported into this scene. Nicely done Thanks for the wonderful comment on my The News I Am Breaking poem. Don't worry, its just something I thought of.
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February 8, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Thanks for your visit again on my work and that is I what I was thinking. Glad I could transport you away forawhile .
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January 7, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Michael, thank you for everything, Congrats for the well deserved win...always~ Linda
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January 7, 2014 at 11:32 AM
Thanks linda
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October 12, 2013 at 10:47 AM
a lovely breeze, Michael such dreamy imagery. I never thought of the moon having rays... Now I sense and feel the line and light... excellent... SKAT
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October 12, 2013 at 10:49 AM
Aww thanks I want people to feel like they are taking the walk. Where they can close their eyes and see the scene I have written and almost feel the breeze
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October 10, 2013 at 11:08 PM
nice walk Michael.
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October 11, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Thanks Kiran this is my first time writing poetry
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