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Moonlight Walk

A night in fall nice and crisp great four a stroll. You grab your ladies hand as you stroll down the sand. You stop and gaze at the stary sky as you walk at a leisurely pace. The crickets and frogs peacefully serenade young lovers as the moonlight rays glisten from the waves. A cool fall breeze rustles the fall leaves. A wise old owl gives you a hello As you pass him by. The sand is dry as your feet imply.

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Date: 2/17/2014 9:47:00 AM
Beautiful Michael, this is one of my faves from you. SKAT
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Date: 2/19/2014 6:20:00 AM
Thanks Skat glad you like it. I am sorry it has taken so long to reply but I have met someone that I want to spend every day and every hour with. I will be posting a blog about what's happening with me.
Date: 2/8/2014 8:43:00 PM
Michael What a beautifully creative write. It is so serene and descriptive, I am transported into this scene. Nicely done Thanks for the wonderful comment on my The News I Am Breaking poem. Don't worry, its just something I thought of.
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Date: 2/8/2014 8:58:00 PM
Thanks for your visit again on my work and that is I what I was thinking. Glad I could transport you away forawhile .
Date: 1/7/2014 11:17:00 AM
Michael, thank you for everything, Congrats for the well deserved win...always~ Linda
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Date: 1/7/2014 11:32:00 AM
Thanks linda
Date: 10/12/2013 10:47:00 AM
a lovely breeze, Michael such dreamy imagery. I never thought of the moon having rays... Now I sense and feel the line and light... excellent... SKAT
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Date: 10/12/2013 10:49:00 AM
Aww thanks I want people to feel like they are taking the walk. Where they can close their eyes and see the scene I have written and almost feel the breeze
Date: 10/10/2013 11:08:00 PM
nice walk Michael.
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Date: 10/11/2013 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Kiran this is my first time writing poetry

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