Moonlight Shadow

High Heels
Picking up pace
Footsteps behind,
Matching mine.

Moonlight
Tall shadow
Stalking me.

21.09.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Radhakrishna Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Congrats on your top win with a very picture creating write!! it it moves too!!! well done!!
Mitra Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Thanks Krish....A real moving picture :)
Watt Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 9:00 AM
What a tantalizing write, Carol. Good thing it was only your shadow stalking you! Congrats on your #1 win ~ John
Mitra Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Thanks John.....much appreciated.
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:22 AM
Very nice picture...me and my shadow! Congratulations on the win!
Mitra Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Thanks Linda....much appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:12 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mitra Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 6:42 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise...hugs right back :)
May Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 4:09 AM
A scary scene Carol, Congrats on your win..
Mitra Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 6:41 AM
Thanks Joseph....much appreciated.
Callus Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 1:32 PM
That is scary, Carol! Time to start running!! Regards :) // paul
Mitra Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 7:29 PM
Thanks Paul.....unfortunately one cannot run from one's shadow and yet it gets our heart beating faster on a lonely moonlit night :)
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 2:19 PM
gosh what an intense picture you created in so few words!:-) hugs Jan xx
Mitra Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 6:59 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Brul Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 11:24 PM
Oh so lovely..Vivid and crisp! It's like an evening delight Ms. Carol.
Mitra Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 12:02 AM
Thanks:)
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