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Moonlight on Meadows

Red fireflies floating in air In amber sublime floral lair Cicada’s silver song soft in ear Carried along blue breeze to here Onyx owl black barn type Predator fowl majestic in flight Shadowy silhouette in the night Stars that twinkle a night light Weeds that sway a night ballet Like lovely lullaby along the lake And rain falls like icing on cake Gentle and calm amazing grace Up above is melodic moon Eclipsing sun her handsome groom Rabbit slumbers in grass green Moonlight on meadows a magical dream

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Date: 9/5/2024 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful/colorful write. I see you have your wonderful box of colors out know as words. What a line, "Rabbit slumbers in grass green" they sure do. Love This One... Have a blessed day writing away................
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/5/2024 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Paula!
Date: 9/5/2024 6:49:00 AM
Dear karen, this is so beautiful! Your use of colors here is so stunning! Love especially the opening lines and how youv painted imagery too in such an exquisite way! “ Up above is melodic moon Eclipsing sun her handsome groom” this! I just love those lines! You really have created metaphors in a very ethereal manner. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your win
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/5/2024 8:04:00 AM
Your titles are always so inspiring and your contest was too! Thank you Inky!
Date: 8/25/2024 11:39:00 AM
Another one with great imagery. Love it. Good luck in contest.
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/6/2024 10:26:00 PM
Thanks Alesia!
Date: 8/23/2024 2:58:00 PM
What a vivid canvas of images you have painted, Karen! One stunner after another. Every line a gem! Bravo, Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 8/23/2024 3:29:00 PM
Thanks dear poet!

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