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Moonlight on Meadows

Meandering through the moonlit meadows, the moonbeams cast magical mauve shadows; The clair de lune cloaks the clouded clearing, Arcane rays gleam in august appearing; Thus enchants the round empyrean queen with elysian echoes etched on the scene; The land lighted by the lambent lantern looks lush with luminous lunar pattern; The celestial chandelier calmly charms night's blue blooms without belligerent qualms; The steppe sleeps under sentinel silver who guards the grassland with glows that shimmer; The pale white pearl projects peace on the plains, Under her creamy care, no one complains.

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Date: 9/6/2024 5:17:00 AM
"The pale white pearl"... a lovely metaphor for the moon. Your poem a rhythmic flow to it. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/5/2024 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 9/5/2024 5:32:00 AM
Dear joanna, wow! I didnt know when i judged this poem was written by you, but now I understand why i couldnt stop reading this gem! Your alliteration game is going strong here and is absolutely gorgeous! The imagery and wordplay and everything here left me in awe captivated and just hooked from the very first line! I cant even choose a line i love cus everything about this is gorgeous! You have a way with words and your way of writing connects with my soul! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/24/2024 11:29:00 AM
eloquent lines make this work glow like the moon, joanna ...we chose the same theme ohhh!
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Date: 8/24/2024 3:07:00 AM
Oh this is fabulous. So great alliteration and imagery. A meaningful poem which I truly love.
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Date: 8/22/2024 1:05:00 AM
Oh, beautiful... love it. God bless you. love, Gina
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Date: 8/22/2024 12:25:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Well done.
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