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Moonlight on Meadows

Sunlight or Moonlight - Moonlight on Meadows chosen title 8-21-24 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Moonlight on Meadows Moonlight lays with meadows Splashing auroras of platinum mist On midnight As lupine enters Luna’s corona Dressed in veils of silver blue. Light’s fingertips spread wide Taking in the silk caress – Hypnotic lavender and clover. The silent silver flute song Parts tangled nests of moonlit shadows Sinking deeply into the crucible of light While florid breaths of tuberose, Leave an argent kiss In moon pearls of satin dews. Garlands of scented leaves Undulate in polar wax and wane Swaying Holding close arching moonbows of sterling. In full splendor of lunar madness Sweet midnight ambrosias explode To dust the moonlight and meadows With crystal bits of silver glitz.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2024 9:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful/colorful write. Love This One... Have a blessed day writing away................

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/5/2024 10:19:00 AM

Dear Paula! Thank you so much for your note of congratulations and lovely comments! So appreciated. It was fun to step into a moonlit night on a meadow and feel the enchantment then share it! Blessings to you!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/5/2024 6:23:00 AM

Dear beautiful samszy! I really love the melodious nature of your words woven here in such eloquence! Your use of colors here is absolutely gorgeous too! And such sumptuous metaphors throughout this! Can see the magical ambience of Luna and her aura through your well crafted words! I especially love lyrical diction too! You truly are an artist! The only reason i gave this second was because “ silver “ was used thrice but still. Must i highlight, that last line! It won me over! Crystal bits of silver glitz! A line i wish i had written! Love love this! Congratulations on your win

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/5/2024 10:17:00 AM

Dearest Inky, I am so pleased that I could share the beauty of a moonlit summer night with you. These nights are enchantment personified as the moon and the meadow share a love for each other! Had fun creating that last line!! Thank you for your placement. I didn't even see that I had used silver three times! Sending you blessings of soft moonlight!!

Joseph May

Date: 8/28/2024 11:24:00 AM

You weave your words beautifully Sam, I enjoyed the read, Many Blessings

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/28/2024 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Joseph! This contest was both challenging and delightful! So much fun to see what happens with a set of unrelated words! Hope you are well. Sending you many blessings!

Paige Hind

Date: 8/27/2024 1:50:00 PM

Enchanting writing, Sam...the imagery had me, really good...:)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/27/2024 4:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Paige. I love warm summer nights when moonlight casts a silver spell over everything! Sending you blessings of summer beauty.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/27/2024 2:42:00 AM

c'mn, tonight when I see the moon I shall recite your poem, 'dressed in silver blues/ silent silver flute song/ florid breaths of tuberose/ garlands of scented leaves' you are a blessed poet dear, dear Empress loves moon very much! I'll be back to share a cheerful smile.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/27/2024 4:43:00 PM

What a beautiful honor - to have you recite this poem as you drink in the beauty of a moonlit summer night dressed in silver blues. Truly a blessing and I am so grateful and deeply touched, Thriveni! Thank you. There is nothing like sharing the beauty of a summer night with a friend! Sending you blessings of smiles and cricket songs!!

Silent One

Date: 8/23/2024 12:00:00 PM

I chose this theme too.. I really love the arrangement of your words and your actual choice of words to create such delicate and vivid imagery.. Love how it started and flowed... I love how your poem is a lyrical celebration of the moon’s magic and its transformative effect on the nightscape, rendered with exquisite, evocative language

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/27/2024 4:37:00 PM

Hi SO! Moonlight is so magical and feels like velvet on a warm summer night - something so special and memorable. Thank you for affirming my efforts to capture that magic! So happy you got to experience a "lyrical celebration" on a summer night! Thank you for your wonderful, very thought full compliments! Appreciated more than you know. Sending you blessings of magical moonlight on a summer night! Loved your entry!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/22/2024 4:46:00 AM

wow Sam, your imagery is exquisite and I love the subtle use of colours too:-) hugs jan xx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/22/2024 12:07:00 PM

Hi Jan! So warming to find your beautiful feedback on a gloomy summer day! Thank you for bringing your special brand of joy into my day. There have been many warm summer nights when I stood transfixed by the magic of moonlight caressing a meadow. Very special. I am so happy that I was able to translate that wonder into this poem! Sending you blessings, gratitude and a big hug! Hope you are having a wonderful summer on your island!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/22/2024 4:17:00 AM

the lustrous burst of lines enthrall much like the moonglow you describe so well. ..gorgeous piece, Sam!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/22/2024 12:00:00 PM

Thank you so much, Nette! Watching the interplay of moonlight and a midnight meadow is enthralling. Everything thing seems to sparkle and glow in elegance. So appreciate your lovely response! Blessings to you!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/21/2024 9:36:00 PM

Brilliant work, Sam, you have taken the theme to a new level:) I'm working on the same theme:)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/21/2024 10:24:00 PM

Hi Jo! I wasn't sure about this poem but your wonderful response is very reassuring! Many thanks! Can't wait to read your entry! Sending you my gratitude and blessings!