Moonlight In Atlanta

I devoured her in the way the moon took over the night time shining its light in all the darkest places, gazing among places untouched by another’s light. I was always your sun and you were my moon. Innocent rays of light touching each other's skin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May 18, 2017 at 11:52 AM
I love the feeling that this one expresses. This is very nicely done.
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May 20, 2017 at 1:21 AM
Thank you so much Chris!
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May 17, 2017 at 12:18 PM
A short but great suggestive write Tiani:) Amitiés
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May 17, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Thank you Anne it means a lot!
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May 17, 2017 at 12:06 PM
That is beautiful. Very beautiful :)
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May 17, 2017 at 12:08 PM
Thank you so much!:)
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