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For Brian Strand's Your Choice K Poetry Contest 22 May 2025

moonlight hiku


               *    *  *
        *        *     moonlight drizzles soft  
      *      *        on the quiet windowpane~  
     *       *       whispers through still leaves  
     *        *
       *           *
              *      *  *

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 8, 2025 at 6:06 PM

This is a stunning hiku, Dear JCB. "moonlight drizzles soft" - a fantastic image!

Susan Ashley

July 5, 2025 at 7:54 AM

Dear JCB, your moonlight hiku is a serene sensory experience. Beautiful and dreamy and your visual crescent moon captures and compliments the verse where whispers are heard only when “still leaves” are quiet. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan

Sally Eslinger

June 30, 2025 at 8:15 AM

JCB, this marvelous haiku for me held sight memories & hearing & touchas well as the inner volumes about silence, leaves…The moon is the motion, sound, substance…Loaded! yeti must center way down in order to catch & understand the whispers…wow & finally i am frustrated, unable to Know the whispers…

Gershon Wolf

May 22, 2025 at 8:12 PM

Love the effect, Jcb. A feast for the senses. ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 22, 2025 at 3:16 PM

Hello JCb, this poem is beautifully done. Hugs. /Darlene/

Kim Rodrigues

May 22, 2025 at 10:21 AM

Congrats!

Paula Goldsmith

May 22, 2025 at 10:09 AM

What a creative "moonlight hiku" write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away..........

I Am Anaya

May 22, 2025 at 6:46 AM

Ah, beautiful,. Congratulations on your win!

JC Brul

May 22, 2025 at 7:28 AM

Thank you, Anaya ^___^

Kim Rodrigues

May 22, 2025 at 6:10 AM

Lovely! an ooh moment

JC Brul

May 22, 2025 at 7:28 AM

Thank you dear Kim^___^

Zyrool Gifford

May 22, 2025 at 4:37 AM

Hello JCB, this is stunningly beautiful. A wonderful picture you have painted. Wishing you a wonderful day.

JC Brul

May 22, 2025 at 7:28 AM

Hello Zyrool, thank you. Wishing u a wonderful day,too. ^___^

Ink Empress

May 22, 2025 at 1:54 AM

This is so dreamy and beautiful dear poetic soul, I absolutely love the way youve delivered such an artistic hiku on moonlight! Such a cosmically pleasing one and the scattered stars truly is soul warming to read! Congratulations on your top win! A fave this is for me! Sending you light always

JC Brul

May 22, 2025 at 7:26 AM

Thank you, Ink. Your heartwarming feedback is like a moonlight. And for the fave, I am honored. ^__^

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