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For Brian Strand's Your Choice K Poetry Contest 22 May 2025

* * * * * moonlight drizzles soft * * on the quiet windowpane~ * * whispers through still leaves * * * * * * *

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/8/2025 6:06:00 PM

This is a stunning hiku, Dear JCB. "moonlight drizzles soft" - a fantastic image!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/5/2025 7:54:00 AM

Dear JCB, your moonlight hiku is a serene sensory experience. Beautiful and dreamy and your visual crescent moon captures and compliments the verse where whispers are heard only when “still leaves” are quiet. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/30/2025 8:15:00 AM

JCB, this marvelous haiku for me held sight memories & hearing & touchas well as the inner volumes about silence, leaves…The moon is the motion, sound, substance…Loaded! yeti must center way down in order to catch & understand the whispers…wow & finally i am frustrated, unable to Know the whispers…

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/22/2025 8:12:00 PM

Love the effect, Jcb. A feast for the senses. ~ Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/22/2025 3:16:00 PM

Hello JCb, this poem is beautifully done. Hugs. /Darlene/

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/22/2025 10:21:00 AM

Congrats!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/22/2025 10:09:00 AM

What a creative "moonlight hiku" write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away..........

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/22/2025 6:46:00 AM

Ah, beautiful,. Congratulations on your win!

JCB Brul
Date: 5/22/2025 7:28:00 AM

Thank you, Anaya ^___^

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/22/2025 6:10:00 AM

Lovely! an ooh moment

JCB Brul
Date: 5/22/2025 7:28:00 AM

Thank you dear Kim^___^

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/22/2025 4:37:00 AM

Hello JCB, this is stunningly beautiful. A wonderful picture you have painted. Wishing you a wonderful day.

JCB Brul
Date: 5/22/2025 7:28:00 AM

Hello Zyrool, thank you. Wishing u a wonderful day,too. ^___^

Ink Empress

Date: 5/22/2025 1:54:00 AM

This is so dreamy and beautiful dear poetic soul, I absolutely love the way youve delivered such an artistic hiku on moonlight! Such a cosmically pleasing one and the scattered stars truly is soul warming to read! Congratulations on your top win! A fave this is for me! Sending you light always

JCB Brul
Date: 5/22/2025 7:26:00 AM

Thank you, Ink. Your heartwarming feedback is like a moonlight. And for the fave, I am honored. ^__^