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moonlight hiku

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        *        *     moonlight drizzles soft  
      *      *        on the quiet windowpane~  
     *       *       whispers through still leaves  
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Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 7/8/2025 6:06:00 PM This is a stunning hiku, Dear JCB. "moonlight drizzles soft" - a fantastic image! Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 7/5/2025 7:54:00 AM Dear JCB, your moonlight hiku is a serene sensory experience. Beautiful and dreamy and your visual crescent moon captures and compliments the verse where whispers are heard only when “still leaves” are quiet. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Sally Eslinger Date: 6/30/2025 8:15:00 AM JCB, this marvelous haiku for me held sight memories & hearing & touchas well as the inner volumes about silence, leaves…The moon is the motion, sound, substance…Loaded! yeti must center way down in order to catch & understand the whispers…wow & finally i am frustrated, unable to Know the whispers… Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/22/2025 8:12:00 PM Love the effect, Jcb. A feast for the senses. ~ Gershon Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/22/2025 3:16:00 PM Hello JCb, this poem is beautifully done. Hugs. /Darlene/ Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/22/2025 10:21:00 AM Congrats! Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/22/2025 10:09:00 AM What a creative "moonlight hiku" write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.......... Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 5/22/2025 6:46:00 AM Ah, beautiful,. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 5/22/2025 7:28:00 AM Thank you, Anaya ^___^

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/22/2025 6:10:00 AM Lovely! an ooh moment Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 5/22/2025 7:28:00 AM Thank you dear Kim^___^

Zyrool Gifford Date: 5/22/2025 4:37:00 AM Hello JCB, this is stunningly beautiful. A wonderful picture you have painted. Wishing you a wonderful day. Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 5/22/2025 7:28:00 AM Hello Zyrool, thank you. Wishing u a wonderful day,too. ^___^

Ink Empress Date: 5/22/2025 1:54:00 AM This is so dreamy and beautiful dear poetic soul, I absolutely love the way youve delivered such an artistic hiku on moonlight! Such a cosmically pleasing one and the scattered stars truly is soul warming to read! Congratulations on your top win! A fave this is for me! Sending you light always Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 5/22/2025 7:26:00 AM Thank you, Ink. Your heartwarming feedback is like a moonlight. And for the fave, I am honored. ^__^