JC Brul Poet Haiku

Moonlight Game

stars come in silence
                   shy moon peeps in thick foliage 
                          playing hide-and-seek 




3 July 2021

A Brian Strand ( July 3) Poetry Contest
1st place

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Valsa George June 3, 2022 at 4:36 AM This playfulness, I love !

Caren Krutsinger August 16, 2021 at 9:16 AM So playful! Line said it too; but it was the best word so I am reiterating it.

Line Gauthier July 21, 2021 at 3:41 AM love the 'playful' imagery ~

Honestly J.T. July 17, 2021 at 2:58 PM Cool poem; -JT

Regina Mcintosh July 8, 2021 at 6:54 AM Lovely haiku. Love it. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Anitha Jayasankar July 6, 2021 at 4:02 AM A cute moonlight game of hide and seek... Enjoyed reading dear friend... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Jan Allison July 4, 2021 at 12:09 PM what a charming haiku JCB. Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich July 4, 2021 at 9:18 AM cute one!! Congrats for the win

Susan Ashley July 3, 2021 at 9:25 AM Dear JCB, your gifted and golden pen portrays stunning nighttime beauty. Vivid yet velvety imagery glimpsing the shy moon. Splendid! Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan